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by: Sarwar A. Raz - Thu, 3 Jun 2021 18:43 UTC

yaaraan-e-meHfil: aadaab!

Ghazal ko "Urdu shaa,i'ree kee aabroo" kahaa jaataa hai. Ghazal ko nikaal deNe to jo kuchh bachtaa hai woh aham, dilkash aur baa-waqaar hai lekin Ghazal kee baat hee aur hai. Ghazal meN she'riyat, zabaan-o-bayaan kaa Husn, maZaameen kee balandee, waardaat-e-qalb waGhairah dekhe jaate haiN. in ke a'laawah alfaaz kaa intiKhaab aur bandish ko bhee parakhte haiN. ek Ghazal pesh kar rahaa hooN jis meN alfaaz aur bandish kaa Khayaal rakhne kee koshish kee gayee hai. is kee radeef aur qaafiye bhee qaabil-e-Ghaur haiN. aap sab dostoN se tawajjoh aur raaye kee darKhwaast hai. shukriyah!

GHAZAL :

raah-o-rasm-e-ulfat meN kuchh kamee see lagtee hai
warnah kyoN lagee dil kee dil-lagee see lagtee hai ?

beKhudee ke parde meN aagahee see lagtee hai
dekhtaa hooN jo Soorat aap hee see lagtee hai

yaad ke jharokoN se yaad-e-yaar aatee hai
teergee-e-shab meN bhee chaaNdnee see lagtee hai

koochah-e-nigaaraaN se jab hawaa-e-aawaarah
gungunaatee aatee hai, sar-phiree see lagtee hai

kyaa yehee mauHabbat hai? gar naheeN to phir kyaa hai?
bekalee see lagtee thee, bekalee see lagtee hai

ek yaad aatee hai, ek yaad jaatee hai
boltee huyee har soo Khaamshee see lagtee hai

apne shehr meN aksar raah bhool jaataa hooN
har galee mujhe ab to baa,olee see lagtee hai

aah! is muHabbat meN kyaa maqaam aayaa hai
Khud ko apnee Soorat bhee ajnabee see lagtee hai

kis qadar Khamoshee hai aaKhir-e-shab-e-hijraaN
HasratoN kee yeh hichkee aaKhiree see lagtee hai

koyee kyaa sune Sarwar teree daastaan-e-Gham
baat jo bhee kartaa hai, shaa,iree see lagtee hai!

Sarwar Raz

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by: Irfan Abid - Sat, 5 Jun 2021 04:03 UTC

On Thursday, June 3, 2021 at 2:43:52 PM UTC-4, Sarwar A. Raz wrote:
> yaaraan-e-meHfil: aadaab!
>
> Ghazal ko "Urdu shaa,i'ree kee aabroo" kahaa jaataa hai. Ghazal ko nikaal deNe to jo kuchh bachtaa hai woh aham, dilkash aur baa-waqaar hai lekin Ghazal kee baat hee aur hai. Ghazal meN she'riyat, zabaan-o-bayaan kaa Husn, maZaameen kee balandee, waardaat-e-qalb waGhairah dekhe jaate haiN. in ke a'laawah alfaaz kaa intiKhaab aur bandish ko bhee parakhte haiN. ek Ghazal pesh kar rahaa hooN jis meN alfaaz aur bandish kaa Khayaal rakhne kee koshish kee gayee hai. is kee radeef aur qaafiye bhee qaabil-e-Ghaur haiN. aap sab dostoN se tawajjoh aur raaye kee darKhwaast hai. shukriyah!
>
> GHAZAL :
>
> raah-o-rasm-e-ulfat meN kuchh kamee see lagtee hai
> warnah kyoN lagee dil kee dil-lagee see lagtee hai ?
>
> beKhudee ke parde meN aagahee see lagtee hai
> dekhtaa hooN jo Soorat aap hee see lagtee hai
>
> yaad ke jharokoN se yaad-e-yaar aatee hai
> teergee-e-shab meN bhee chaaNdnee see lagtee hai
>
> koochah-e-nigaaraaN se jab hawaa-e-aawaarah
> gungunaatee aatee hai, sar-phiree see lagtee hai
>
> kyaa yehee mauHabbat hai? gar naheeN to phir kyaa hai?
> bekalee see lagtee thee, bekalee see lagtee hai
>
> ek yaad aatee hai, ek yaad jaatee hai
> boltee huyee har soo Khaamshee see lagtee hai
>
> apne shehr meN aksar raah bhool jaataa hooN
> har galee mujhe ab to baa,olee see lagtee hai
>
> aah! is muHabbat meN kyaa maqaam aayaa hai
> Khud ko apnee Soorat bhee ajnabee see lagtee hai
>
> kis qadar Khamoshee hai aaKhir-e-shab-e-hijraaN
> HasratoN kee yeh hichkee aaKhiree see lagtee hai
>
> koyee kyaa sune Sarwar teree daastaan-e-Gham
> baat jo bhee kartaa hai, shaa,iree see lagtee hai!
>
> Sarwar Raz
>

muhtaram Sarwar sb, aadaab!

bahut umdah Ghazal hai! daad qubuul farmaaiye.

niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:

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by: Khalid Siddiqui - Sat, 5 Jun 2021 12:56 UTC

On Saturday, June 5, 2021 at 12:03:53 AM UTC-4, Irfan Abid wrote:
> On Thursday, June 3, 2021 at 2:43:52 PM UTC-4, Sarwar A. Raz wrote:
> > yaaraan-e-meHfil: aadaab!
> >
> > Ghazal ko "Urdu shaa,i'ree kee aabroo" kahaa jaataa hai. Ghazal ko nikaal deNe to jo kuchh bachtaa hai woh aham, dilkash aur baa-waqaar hai lekin Ghazal kee baat hee aur hai. Ghazal meN she'riyat, zabaan-o-bayaan kaa Husn, maZaameen kee balandee, waardaat-e-qalb waGhairah dekhe jaate haiN. in ke a'laawah alfaaz kaa intiKhaab aur bandish ko bhee parakhte haiN. ek Ghazal pesh kar rahaa hooN jis meN alfaaz aur bandish kaa Khayaal rakhne kee koshish kee gayee hai. is kee radeef aur qaafiye bhee qaabil-e-Ghaur haiN. aap sab dostoN se tawajjoh aur raaye kee darKhwaast hai. shukriyah!
> >
> > GHAZAL :
> >
> > raah-o-rasm-e-ulfat meN kuchh kamee see lagtee hai
> > warnah kyoN lagee dil kee dil-lagee see lagtee hai ?
> >
> > beKhudee ke parde meN aagahee see lagtee hai
> > dekhtaa hooN jo Soorat aap hee see lagtee hai
> >
> > yaad ke jharokoN se yaad-e-yaar aatee hai
> > teergee-e-shab meN bhee chaaNdnee see lagtee hai
> >
> > koochah-e-nigaaraaN se jab hawaa-e-aawaarah
> > gungunaatee aatee hai, sar-phiree see lagtee hai
> >
> > kyaa yehee mauHabbat hai? gar naheeN to phir kyaa hai?
> > bekalee see lagtee thee, bekalee see lagtee hai
> >
> > ek yaad aatee hai, ek yaad jaatee hai
> > boltee huyee har soo Khaamshee see lagtee hai
> >
> > apne shehr meN aksar raah bhool jaataa hooN
> > har galee mujhe ab to baa,olee see lagtee hai
> >
> > aah! is muHabbat meN kyaa maqaam aayaa hai
> > Khud ko apnee Soorat bhee ajnabee see lagtee hai
> >
> > kis qadar Khamoshee hai aaKhir-e-shab-e-hijraaN
> > HasratoN kee yeh hichkee aaKhiree see lagtee hai
> >
> > koyee kyaa sune Sarwar teree daastaan-e-Gham
> > baat jo bhee kartaa hai, shaa,iree see lagtee hai!
> >
> > Sarwar Raz
> >
> muhtaram Sarwar sb, aadaab!
>
> bahut umdah Ghazal hai! daad qubuul farmaaiye.
>
> niyaazmand,
> Irfan :Abid:
Aadaab:
Very nice. Good use of the word baa,olee - in a different meaning than usual.
Best wishes.
Khalid

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by: Zoya - Sat, 5 Jun 2021 15:00 UTC

On Thursday, June 3, 2021 at 1:43:52 PM UTC-5, Sarwar A. Raz wrote:
> yaaraan-e-meHfil: aadaab!
>
> Ghazal ko "Urdu shaa,i'ree kee aabroo" kahaa jaataa hai. Ghazal ko nikaal deNe to jo kuchh bachtaa hai woh aham, dilkash aur baa-waqaar hai lekin Ghazal kee baat hee aur hai. Ghazal meN she'riyat, zabaan-o-bayaan kaa Husn, maZaameen kee balandee, waardaat-e-qalb waGhairah dekhe jaate haiN. in ke a'laawah alfaaz kaa intiKhaab aur bandish ko bhee parakhte haiN. ek Ghazal pesh kar rahaa hooN jis meN alfaaz aur bandish kaa Khayaal rakhne kee koshish kee gayee hai. is kee radeef aur qaafiye bhee qaabil-e-Ghaur haiN. aap sab dostoN se tawajjoh aur raaye kee darKhwaast hai. shukriyah!
>
> GHAZAL :
>
> raah-o-rasm-e-ulfat meN kuchh kamee see lagtee hai
> warnah kyoN lagee dil kee dil-lagee see lagtee hai ?
>
> beKhudee ke parde meN aagahee see lagtee hai
> dekhtaa hooN jo Soorat aap hee see lagtee hai
>
> yaad ke jharokoN se yaad-e-yaar aatee hai
> teergee-e-shab meN bhee chaaNdnee see lagtee hai
>
> koochah-e-nigaaraaN se jab hawaa-e-aawaarah
> gungunaatee aatee hai, sar-phiree see lagtee hai
>
> kyaa yehee mauHabbat hai? gar naheeN to phir kyaa hai?
> bekalee see lagtee thee, bekalee see lagtee hai
>
> ek yaad aatee hai, ek yaad jaatee hai
> boltee huyee har soo Khaamshee see lagtee hai
>
> apne shehr meN aksar raah bhool jaataa hooN
> har galee mujhe ab to baa,olee see lagtee hai
>
> aah! is muHabbat meN kyaa maqaam aayaa hai
> Khud ko apnee Soorat bhee ajnabee see lagtee hai
>
> kis qadar Khamoshee hai aaKhir-e-shab-e-hijraaN
> HasratoN kee yeh hichkee aaKhiree see lagtee hai
>
> koyee kyaa sune Sarwar teree daastaan-e-Gham
> baat jo bhee kartaa hai, shaa,iree see lagtee hai!
>
> Sarwar Raz

Sarwar sahib,

aadaab,

aap kii ghazal meN voh sabhii KhuubiyaN haiN jin kaa zikr aap ne uupar kiyaa. aaKhir aap kii ghazal hai. :)

do qavaafii mujhe Khaas taur par qaabil-e-ghaur lage, ek to sar-phirii, jise paRh par mujhe Shikeb Jalali kaa ek she'r yaad aa gayaa jo mujhe behad pasand hai:

na itni tez chale sar phirii hava se kaho
shajar pe ek hi pattaa dikhaaii deta hai

aur duusraa baaolii, jis ka Khalid sahib ne bhii zikr kiyaa. That one was totally unexpected. Nice.

Thank you Sarwar sahib. I always find your ghazals very refreshing.

Regards,

______Zoya

No one can put you down without your full cooperation.

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Ek Ghazal	Sarwar A. Raz
Re: Ek Ghazal	Irfan Abid
Re: Ek Ghazal	Khalid Siddiqui
Re: Ek Ghazal	Zoya