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by: Zod - Tue, 31 May 2022 20:02 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> Pendragon wrote in message
> news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
>>
>> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
>> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage

> Yes, that was the effect I was going for.

And parlayed excellently I might add...

***********************************************
Apple Montage

Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.

Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.

To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.

There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.

Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.

I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.

I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.

The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.

-Will Dockery

***************************************

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by: Will Dockery - Tue, 31 May 2022 22:51 UTC

On Tuesday, May 31, 2022 at 4:05:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > Pendragon wrote in message
> > news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75...@googlegroups.com...
> >>
> >> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
> >> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
>
> > Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
>
> And parlayed excellently I might add...
>
> ***********************************************
> Apple Montage
> Sneaking around
> with Cousin Jenny,
> smoking menthol
> beyond the sheds.
>
> Late summer vacation 1973
> in the backwoods of Tennessee.
>
> To the right
> behind the barn
> were apple trees.
>
> There were several
> of those trees
> and other trees
> behind them
> beyond a field
> and behind them, other trees.
>
> Later, I stood near
> as a crowd
> watched Pops and my Uncle
> cooking apple butter;
> stirring the brown gunk,
> boiling in a huge black kettle.
>
> I saw my father
> secretly pass
> a wine bottle
> to my Uncle Clarence.
>
> I went from
> breathing cold mist
> out back behind the barn,
> to breathing
> the hot misty steam.
>
> The air smelled of apple fumes
> and strong booze.
>
> -Will Dockery
> ***************************************

Thanks again for the endorsement.

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by: W.Dockery - Thu, 2 Jun 2022 12:50 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Pendragon wrote in message
>> news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
>>>
>>> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
>>> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage

>> Yes, that was the effect I was going for.

> And parlayed excellently I might add...

> ***********************************************
> Apple Montage

> Sneaking around
> with Cousin Jenny,
> smoking menthol
> beyond the sheds.

> Late summer vacation 1973
> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

> To the right
> behind the barn
> were apple trees.

> There were several
> of those trees
> and other trees
> behind them
> beyond a field
> and behind them, other trees.

> Later, I stood near
> as a crowd
> watched Pops and my Uncle
> cooking apple butter;
> stirring the brown gunk,
> boiling in a huge black kettle.

> I saw my father
> secretly pass
> a wine bottle
> to my Uncle Clarence.

> I went from
> breathing cold mist
> out back behind the barn,
> to breathing
> the hot misty steam.

> The air smelled of apple fumes
> and strong booze.

> -Will Dockery

> ***************************************

Thanks for the bump, Zod.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Thu, 2 Jun 2022 20:31 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Tuesday, May 31, 2022 at 4:05:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> > Pendragon wrote in message
>> > news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75...@googlegroups.com...
>> >>
>> >> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
>> >> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
>>
>> > Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
>>
>> And parlayed excellently I might add...
>>
>> ***********************************************
>> Apple Montage
>> Sneaking around
>> with Cousin Jenny,
>> smoking menthol
>> beyond the sheds.
>>
>> Late summer vacation 1973
>> in the backwoods of Tennessee.
>>
>> To the right
>> behind the barn
>> were apple trees.
>>
>> There were several
>> of those trees
>> and other trees
>> behind them
>> beyond a field
>> and behind them, other trees.
>>
>> Later, I stood near
>> as a crowd
>> watched Pops and my Uncle
>> cooking apple butter;
>> stirring the brown gunk,
>> boiling in a huge black kettle.
>>
>> I saw my father
>> secretly pass
>> a wine bottle
>> to my Uncle Clarence.
>>
>> I went from
>> breathing cold mist
>> out back behind the barn,
>> to breathing
>> the hot misty steam.
>>
>> The air smelled of apple fumes
>> and strong booze.
>>
>> -Will Dockery
>> ***************************************

> Thanks again for the endorsement.

Thou art most welcome....!

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by: Will Dockery - Fri, 3 Jun 2022 03:38 UTC

On Thursday, June 2, 2022 at 4:35:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > On Tuesday, May 31, 2022 at 4:05:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >> Will Dockery wrote:
> >>
> >> > Pendragon wrote in message
> >> > news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75...@googlegroups.com...
> >> >>
> >> >> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
> >> >> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
> >>
> >> > Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
> >>
> >> And parlayed excellently I might add...
> >>
> >> ***********************************************
> >> Apple Montage
> >> Sneaking around
> >> with Cousin Jenny,
> >> smoking menthol
> >> beyond the sheds.
> >>
> >> Late summer vacation 1973
> >> in the backwoods of Tennessee.
> >>
> >> To the right
> >> behind the barn
> >> were apple trees.
> >>
> >> There were several
> >> of those trees
> >> and other trees
> >> behind them
> >> beyond a field
> >> and behind them, other trees.
> >>
> >> Later, I stood near
> >> as a crowd
> >> watched Pops and my Uncle
> >> cooking apple butter;
> >> stirring the brown gunk,
> >> boiling in a huge black kettle.
> >>
> >> I saw my father
> >> secretly pass
> >> a wine bottle
> >> to my Uncle Clarence.
> >>
> >> I went from
> >> breathing cold mist
> >> out back behind the barn,
> >> to breathing
> >> the hot misty steam.
> >>
> >> The air smelled of apple fumes
> >> and strong booze.
> >>
> >> -Will Dockery
> >> ***************************************
>
> > Thanks again for the endorsement.
> Thou art most welcome....!

Good evening, my friend.

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by: General-Zod - Fri, 3 Jun 2022 20:47 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Thursday, June 2, 2022 at 4:35:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> > On Tuesday, May 31, 2022 at 4:05:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> >> Will Dockery wrote:
>> >>
>> >> > Pendragon wrote in message
>> >> > news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75...@googlegroups.com...
>> >> >>
>> >> >> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
>> >> >> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
>> >>
>> >> > Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
>> >>
>> >> And parlayed excellently I might add...
>> >>
>> >> ***********************************************
>> >> Apple Montage
>> >> Sneaking around
>> >> with Cousin Jenny,
>> >> smoking menthol
>> >> beyond the sheds.
>> >>
>> >> Late summer vacation 1973
>> >> in the backwoods of Tennessee.
>> >>
>> >> To the right
>> >> behind the barn
>> >> were apple trees.
>> >>
>> >> There were several
>> >> of those trees
>> >> and other trees
>> >> behind them
>> >> beyond a field
>> >> and behind them, other trees.
>> >>
>> >> Later, I stood near
>> >> as a crowd
>> >> watched Pops and my Uncle
>> >> cooking apple butter;
>> >> stirring the brown gunk,
>> >> boiling in a huge black kettle.
>> >>
>> >> I saw my father
>> >> secretly pass
>> >> a wine bottle
>> >> to my Uncle Clarence.
>> >>
>> >> I went from
>> >> breathing cold mist
>> >> out back behind the barn,
>> >> to breathing
>> >> the hot misty steam.
>> >>
>> >> The air smelled of apple fumes
>> >> and strong booze.
>> >>
>> >> -Will Dockery
>> >> ***************************************
>>
>> > Thanks again for the endorsement.
>> Thou art most welcome....!

> Good evening, my friend.

Hi there Doc....

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by: W-Dockery - Wed, 8 Jun 2022 23:03 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> On Tuesday, May 31, 2022 at 4:05:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>> >> > Pendragon wrote in message
>>> >> > news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75...@googlegroups.com...
>
>>> >> >> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
>>> >> >> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
>>> >>
>>> >> > Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
>>> >>
>>> >> And parlayed excellently I might add...
>>> >>
>>> >> ***********************************************
>>> >> Apple Montage
>>> >> Sneaking around
>>> >> with Cousin Jenny,
>>> >> smoking menthol
>>> >> beyond the sheds.
>>> >>
>>> >> Late summer vacation 1973
>>> >> in the backwoods of Tennessee.
>>> >>
>>> >> To the right
>>> >> behind the barn
>>> >> were apple trees.
>>> >>
>>> >> There were several
>>> >> of those trees
>>> >> and other trees
>>> >> behind them
>>> >> beyond a field
>>> >> and behind them, other trees.
>>> >>
>>> >> Later, I stood near
>>> >> as a crowd
>>> >> watched Pops and my Uncle
>>> >> cooking apple butter;
>>> >> stirring the brown gunk,
>>> >> boiling in a huge black kettle.
>>> >>
>>> >> I saw my father
>>> >> secretly pass
>>> >> a wine bottle
>>> >> to my Uncle Clarence.
>>> >>
>>> >> I went from
>>> >> breathing cold mist
>>> >> out back behind the barn,
>>> >> to breathing
>>> >> the hot misty steam.
>>> >>
>>> >> The air smelled of apple fumes
>>> >> and strong booze.
>>> >>
>>> >> -Will Dockery
>>> >> ***************************************
>>>
>>> > Thanks again for the endorsement.
>
> Thou art most welcome....!

> Hi there Doc...

Good evening, my friend.

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by: Victor H. - Tue, 21 Jun 2022 21:46 UTC

W.Dockery wrote:
>ill Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> ***********************************************
>> Apple Montage

>> Sneaking around
>> with Cousin Jenny,
>> smoking menthol
>> beyond the sheds.

>> Late summer vacation 1973
>> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

>> To the right
>> behind the barn
>> were apple trees.

>> There were several
>> of those trees
>> and other trees
>> behind them
>> beyond a field
>> and behind them, other trees.

>> Later, I stood near
>> as a crowd
>> watched Pops and my Uncle
>> cooking apple butter;
>> stirring the brown gunk,
>> boiling in a huge black kettle.

>> I saw my father
>> secretly pass
>> a wine bottle
>> to my Uncle Clarence.

>> I went from
>> breathing cold mist
>> out back behind the barn,
>> to breathing
>> the hot misty steam.

>> The air smelled of apple fumes
>> and strong booze.

>> -Will Dockery

>> ***************************************

> Thanks for the bump, Zod.

> 🙂

Good afternoon to you and you are welcome....

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by: W.Dockery - Sat, 25 Jun 2022 12:07 UTC

Victor H. wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>
***********************************************
>>> Apple Montage

>>> Sneaking around
>>> with Cousin Jenny,
>>> smoking menthol
>>> beyond the sheds.

>>> Late summer vacation 1973
>>> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

>>> To the right
>>> behind the barn
>>> were apple trees.

>>> There were several
>>> of those trees
>>> and other trees
>>> behind them
>>> beyond a field
>>> and behind them, other trees.

>>> Later, I stood near
>>> as a crowd
>>> watched Pops and my Uncle
>>> cooking apple butter;
>>> stirring the brown gunk,
>>> boiling in a huge black kettle.

>>> I saw my father
>>> secretly pass
>>> a wine bottle
>>> to my Uncle Clarence.

>>> I went from
>>> breathing cold mist
>>> out back behind the barn,
>>> to breathing
>>> the hot misty steam.

>>> The air smelled of apple fumes
>>> and strong booze.

>>> -Will Dockery

>>> ***************************************

> Good afternoon to you

Hello there, my friend.

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by: General-Zod - Tue, 16 Aug 2022 22:51 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

>
> Apple Montage

> Sneaking around
> with Cousin Jenny,
> smoking menthol
> beyond the sheds.

> Late summer vacation 1973
> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

> To the right
> behind the barn
> were apple trees.

> There were several
> of those trees
> and other trees
> behind them
> beyond a field
> and behind them, other trees.

> Later, I stood near
> as a crowd
> watched Pops and my Uncle
> cooking apple butter;
> stirring the brown gunk,
> boiling in a huge black kettle.

> I saw my father
> secretly pass
> a wine bottle
> to my Uncle Clarence.

> I went from
> breathing cold mist
> out back behind the barn,
> to breathing
> the hot misty steam.

> The air smelled of apple fumes
> and strong booze.

> -Will Dockery

Another read, quite great.....

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by: W-Dockery - Mon, 22 Aug 2022 22:26 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> On Tuesday, May 31, 2022 at 4:05:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>
>>> > Pendragon wrote in message
>>> > news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75...@googlegroups.com...
>>> >>
>>> >> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
>>> >> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
>>>
>>> > Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
>>>
>>> And parlayed excellently I might add...
>>>
>>> ***********************************************
>>> Apple Montage
>>> Sneaking around
>>> with Cousin Jenny,
>>> smoking menthol
>>> beyond the sheds.
>>>
>>> Late summer vacation 1973
>>> in the backwoods of Tennessee.
>>>
>>> To the right
>>> behind the barn
>>> were apple trees.
>>>
>>> There were several
>>> of those trees
>>> and other trees
>>> behind them
>>> beyond a field
>>> and behind them, other trees.
>>>
>>> Later, I stood near
>>> as a crowd
>>> watched Pops and my Uncle
>>> cooking apple butter;
>>> stirring the brown gunk,
>>> boiling in a huge black kettle.
>>>
>>> I saw my father
>>> secretly pass
>>> a wine bottle
>>> to my Uncle Clarence.
>>>
>>> I went from
>>> breathing cold mist
>>> out back behind the barn,
>>> to breathing
>>> the hot misty steam.
>>>
>>> The air smelled of apple fumes
>>> and strong booze.
>>>
>>> -Will Dockery
>>> ***************************************

>> Thanks again for the endorsement.

> Thou art most welcome....!

Good evening, my friend.

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by: W-Dockery - Fri, 26 Aug 2022 12:21 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Yes, that was the effect I was going for.

> And parlayed excellently I might add...

> ***********************************************
> Apple Montage

> Sneaking around
> with Cousin Jenny,
> smoking menthol
> beyond the sheds.

> Late summer vacation 1973
> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

> To the right
> behind the barn
> were apple trees.

> There were several
> of those trees
> and other trees
> behind them
> beyond a field
> and behind them, other trees.

> Later, I stood near
> as a crowd
> watched Pops and my Uncle
> cooking apple butter;
> stirring the brown gunk,
> boiling in a huge black kettle.

> I saw my father
> secretly pass
> a wine bottle
> to my Uncle Clarence.

> I went from
> breathing cold mist
> out back behind the barn,
> to breathing
> the hot misty steam.

> The air smelled of apple fumes
> and strong booze.

> -Will Dockery

> ***************************************

Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

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by: W-Dockery - Wed, 7 Sep 2022 17:45 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Yes, that was the effect I was going for.

> And parlayed excellently I might add...

> ***********************************************
> Apple Montage

> Sneaking around
> with Cousin Jenny,
> smoking menthol
> beyond the sheds.

> Late summer vacation 1973
> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

> To the right
> behind the barn
> were apple trees.

> There were several
> of those trees
> and other trees
> behind them
> beyond a field
> and behind them, other trees.

> Later, I stood near
> as a crowd
> watched Pops and my Uncle
> cooking apple butter;
> stirring the brown gunk,
> boiling in a huge black kettle.

> I saw my father
> secretly pass
> a wine bottle
> to my Uncle Clarence.

> I went from
> breathing cold mist
> out back behind the barn,
> to breathing
> the hot misty steam.

> The air smelled of apple fumes
> and strong booze.

> -Will Dockery

> ***************************************

True, that poem has stood the test of time.

🙂

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by: W.Dockery - Fri, 9 Sep 2022 23:13 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Thanks again for the endorsement.

> Thou art most welcome....!

Remember, don't use "alas".

🙂

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by: Victor H. - Thu, 22 Sep 2022 18:11 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Tuesday, May 31, 2022 at 4:05:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> > Pendragon wrote in message
>> > news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75...@googlegroups.com...
>
>> >> Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
>> >> juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
>>
>> > Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
>>
>> And parlayed excellently I might add...
>>
>> ***********************************************
>> Apple Montage
>> Sneaking around
>> with Cousin Jenny,
>> smoking menthol
>> beyond the sheds.
>>
>> Late summer vacation 1973
>> in the backwoods of Tennessee.
>>
>> To the right
>> behind the barn
>> were apple trees.
>>
>> There were several
>> of those trees
>> and other trees
>> behind them
>> beyond a field
>> and behind them, other trees.
>>
>> Later, I stood near
>> as a crowd
>> watched Pops and my Uncle
>> cooking apple butter;
>> stirring the brown gunk,
>> boiling in a huge black kettle.
>>
>> I saw my father
>> secretly pass
>> a wine bottle
>> to my Uncle Clarence.
>>
>> I went from
>> breathing cold mist
>> out back behind the barn,
>> to breathing
>> the hot misty steam.
>>
>> The air smelled of apple fumes
>> and strong booze.
>>
>> -Will Dockery
>> ***************************************

> Thanks again for the endorsement.

An all-time FAVE...

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by: W-Dockery - Sun, 25 Sep 2022 19:18 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Yes, that was the effect I was going for.

> And parlayed excellently I might add...

> ***********************************************
> Apple Montage

> Sneaking around
> with Cousin Jenny,
> smoking menthol
> beyond the sheds.

> Late summer vacation 1973
> in the backwoods of Tennessee.

> To the right
> behind the barn
> were apple trees.

> There were several
> of those trees
> and other trees
> behind them
> beyond a field
> and behind them, other trees.

> Later, I stood near
> as a crowd
> watched Pops and my Uncle
> cooking apple butter;
> stirring the brown gunk,
> boiling in a huge black kettle.

> I saw my father
> secretly pass
> a wine bottle
> to my Uncle Clarence.

> I went from
> breathing cold mist
> out back behind the barn,
> to breathing
> the hot misty steam.

> The air smelled of apple fumes
> and strong booze.

> -Will Dockery

> ********************************

Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

🙂

Day of inquiry. You will be subpoenaed.

arts / alt.arts.poetry.comments / Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery

Subject	Author
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	Zod
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	Will Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	General-Zod
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	Will Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	General-Zod
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	W-Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	W-Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery	W.Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	Victor H.
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	W.Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	Victor H.
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	W.Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	General-Zod
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	W-Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	W-Dockery
Re: Apple Montage / a poem by Will Dockery	W-Dockery