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by: Edward Rochester Esq - Mon, 25 Jul 2022 16:53 UTC

Re: Run Silent Run Deep by jimbsh

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Subject: Re: Run Silent Run Deep by jimbsh
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by: NancyGene - Mon, 25 Jul 2022 17:16 UTC

On Monday, July 25, 2022 at 4:53:32 PM UTC, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> If all words embolden fools, say nothing,
> for all fools enjoy the bout
> but already I've failed to heed the words
> of my own wisdom.
>
> My now silence will speak volumes.
jimbsh, the last line is awkward. Would you consider "My silence now will speak volumes."

Don't send money to fools either.

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Subject: Re: Run Silent Run Deep by jimbsh
From: blackpoo...@aol.com (Edward Rochester Esq.)
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by: Edward Rochester Esq - Mon, 25 Jul 2022 17:58 UTC

On Monday, July 25, 2022 at 1:16:46 PM UTC-4, NancyGene wrote:
> On Monday, July 25, 2022 at 4:53:32 PM UTC, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> > If all words embolden fools, say nothing,
> > for all fools enjoy the bout
> > but already I've failed to heed the words
> > of my own wisdom.
> >
> > My now silence will speak volumes.
> jimbsh, the last line is awkward. Would you consider "My silence now will speak volumes."
>
> Don't send money to fools either.

No, as is suits me fine, just

Subject	Author
Run Silent Run Deep by jimbsh	Edward Rochester Esq.
Re: Run Silent Run Deep by jimbsh	NancyGene
Re: Run Silent Run Deep by jimbsh	Edward Rochester Esq.