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* DaybreakEdward Rochester Esq.
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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Wed, 23 Nov 2022 17:23 UTC

Daybreak

The real shambles
is not a poem title
or the body of such
telling a story of a day
in the life of peculiar
living.

In the long run
it was about a life
alone on a bench
surrounded by the dregs
of which he is a member.

In the end, the story
was about himself
where ego outweighs
all thought of reality.

He was the drunk that drooled,
he was the whore that serviced
for money, he was the one that wrote
of emptiness, disguised as "Look
I create at midnight, then walk home
alone."

He will fight to protect his worth,
long after the drunk has sobered,
perhaps return to the bench
hoping to pay for attention.

Edward Rochester Esq.

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Subject: Re: Daybreak
From: ashwurth...@gmail.com (Ash Wurthing)
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 by: Ash Wurthing - Wed, 23 Nov 2022 20:25 UTC

On Wednesday, November 23, 2022 at 12:23:40 PM UTC-5, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> Daybreak
>
> The real shambles
> is not a poem title
> or the body of such
> telling a story of a day
> in the life of peculiar
> living.
>
> In the long run
> it was about a life
> alone on a bench
> surrounded by the dregs
> of which he is a member.
>
> In the end, the story
> was about himself
> where ego outweighs
> all thought of reality.
>
> He was the drunk that drooled,
> he was the whore that serviced
> for money, he was the one that wrote
> of emptiness, disguised as "Look
> I create at midnight, then walk home
> alone."
>
> He will fight to protect his worth,
> long after the drunk has sobered,
> perhaps return to the bench
> hoping to pay for attention.
>
> Edward Rochester Esq.

yep, everything that poet does is his ego talkin'
He says this place is HIS home, but nothing about this place being any one else's.
I write some ego-centric stuff, but what I feel is my important pieces are about others...

This song sums it up all too well (i believe I may have posted it before, but worth posting again)
"And they all said
If you ever make it out write down what you’ve seen
So we all live forever and were finally free
They said we need it right and you’re the only one we trust
So promise that you’ll write about us"
--'Write About Us' ~~KING 810
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mp_II1kYUtY

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