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by: Will Dockery - Mon, 7 Nov 2022 12:06 UTC

Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>
> > ---------------------------------------------
> > Shambles
>
> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>
> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
> > somewhere around Kentucky,
> > and then North oats",
> > all these in Carolina,
> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>
> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
> > were pretty entertaining,
> > as I just sat there and typed,
> > playing the white straight man type,
> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>
> > That went okay for a few minutes
> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
> > and wandered away,
> > on up the sidewalk.
>
> > Then when a crack hooker chick
> > in real shambles came along,
> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>
> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>
> > -Will Dockery 2017
> > -----------------------------------------
>
> > HTH & HAND.
>
> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Mon, 7 Nov 2022 22:28 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>
>> > ---------------------------------------------
>> > Shambles
>>
>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>
>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>> > and then North oats",
>> > all these in Carolina,
>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>
>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>> > were pretty entertaining,
>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>> > playing the white straight man type,
>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>
>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>> > and wandered away,
>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>
>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>> > in real shambles came along,
>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>
>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>
>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>> > -----------------------------------------
>>
>> > HTH & HAND.
>>
>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

Yep...!

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by: W.Dockery - Tue, 8 Nov 2022 04:56 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>
>>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>>
>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>> > Shambles
>>>
>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>
>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>> > and then North oats",
>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>
>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>
>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>> > and wandered away,
>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>
>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>
>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>
>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>
>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>
>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

> Yep...!

Good evening, my friend.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Tue, 8 Nov 2022 21:33 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>> Zod wrote:
>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>
>>>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>>>
>>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>>> > Shambles
>>>>
>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>
>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>
>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>
>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>
>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>
>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>
>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>>
>>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>>
>>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

>> Yep...!

> Good evening, my friend.

Right on....!

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by: W-Dockery - Wed, 9 Nov 2022 05:04 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:

>>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>>> Zod wrote:
>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>>>>
>>>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>>>> > Shambles
>>>>>
>>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>>
>>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>>
>>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>>
>>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>>
>>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>>
>>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>>
>>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>>>
>>>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>>>
>>>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>>
>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

>
>
> Yep...!

> Right on....!

Good evening my friend.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Wed, 9 Nov 2022 21:27 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>> Zod wrote:
>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>>>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>>>>> > Shambles
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>>>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>>>>
>>>>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>>>
>>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

>>
>>
>> Yep...!

>> Right on....!

> Good evening my friend.

Good day to you sir, being the poetry lover that i am i found this poem to be of a certain dark beauty...!

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by: W-Dockery - Thu, 10 Nov 2022 03:25 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:

>>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>>> Zod wrote:
>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>>>>>>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>>>>>> > Shambles
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>>>>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>>>>
>>>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

>>>
>>>
>>> Yep...!

>>>

>>> Right on....!

>> Good evening my friend.

> Good day to you sir, being the poetry lover that i am i found this poem to be of a certain dark beauty...!

Thanks again, this is another reality based poem.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Tue, 15 Nov 2022 20:50 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:

>> Will Dockery wrote:

>>> Zod wrote:
>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>>>>>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>>>>>>> > Shambles
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>>>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>>>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>>>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>>>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>>>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>>>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>>>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>>>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>>>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>>>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>>>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>>>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>>>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>>>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>>>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>>>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>>>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>>>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>>>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>>>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>>>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>>>>>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>>>>>
>>>>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Yep...!

>>>>

>>>> Right on....!

>>> Good evening my friend.

>> Good day to you sir, being the poetry lover that i am i found this poem to be of a certain dark beauty...!

> Thanks again, this is another reality based poem.

> 🙂

I know that street WELL...!

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by: W-Dockery - Wed, 16 Nov 2022 02:07 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

> Yep...!

Good evening my friend.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Sun, 20 Nov 2022 21:34 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>> Zod wrote:
>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>>>>>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>>>>>>> > Shambles
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>>>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>>>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>>>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>>>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>>>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>>>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>>>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>>>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>>>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>>>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>>>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>>>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>>>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>>>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>>>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>>>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>>>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>>>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>>>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>>>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>>>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>>>>>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>>>>>
>>>>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Yep...!

>>>>

>>>> Right on....!

>>> Good evening my friend.

>> Good day to you sir, being the poetry lover that i am i found this poem to be of a certain dark beauty...!

> Thanks again, this is another reality based poem.

It is quite on the slice of life level of poetry...

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by: W.Dockery - Tue, 22 Nov 2022 00:29 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>> Zod wrote:
>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>>>>>>>>> > Stop lying, Rochester, I wrote every word:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>> > Shambles
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>>>>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>>>>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>>>>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>>>>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>>>>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>>>>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>>>>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>>>>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>>>>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>>>>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>>>>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>>>>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>>>>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>>>>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>>>>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>>>>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>>>>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>>>>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>>>>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>>>>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>>>>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>>>>>>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>>>>>>
>>>>>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Yep...!

>>>>>

>>>>> Right on....!

>>>> Good evening my friend.

>>> Good day to you sir, being the poetry lover that i am i found this poem to be of a certain dark beauty...!

>> Thanks again, this is another reality based poem.

> It is quite on the slice of life level of poetry...

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

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General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

> Yep...!

Thanks again, my friend.

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by: General-Zod - Tue, 29 Nov 2022 20:24 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>> > ---------------------------------------------
>>>> > Shambles
>>>>
>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>
>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>
>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>
>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>
>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>
>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>
>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>>>> > -----------------------------------------
>>>>
>>>> > HTH & HAND.
>>>>
>>>> Exactly, an editor does NOT get creators rights on a poem....!!

>>> Especially if the "edit" wasn't used.

>> Yep...!

> Good evening, my friend.

> 🙂

Good DAY to you....!

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by: W-Dockery - Wed, 30 Nov 2022 22:40 UTC

General-Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>>> > Shambles
>>>>>
>>>>> > Yes, the "Richard Pryor" looking guy was somewhat interesting,
>>>>> > except that he was so drunk he was drooling.
>>>>> > He either thought I looked like Mark Twain or Gene Wilder,
>>>>> > sitting on the bench on Broadway at Midnight, typing.
>>>>>
>>>>> > He seemed to think we were from the same home area,
>>>>> > somewhere around Kentucky,
>>>>> > and then North oats",
>>>>> > all these in Carolina,
>>>>> > where his family worked on "crab boats".
>>>>>
>>>>> > All these short stories and his 1970s comedy asides,
>>>>> > the out of the side of his mouth political jabs and so on,
>>>>> > were pretty entertaining,
>>>>> > as I just sat there and typed,
>>>>> > playing the white straight man type,
>>>>> > like in Stir Crazy and Silver Streak,
>>>>> > wild Einstein afro hair flapping in the breeze.
>>>>>
>>>>> > That went okay for a few minutes
>>>>> > until Pryor knocked over my coffee,
>>>>> > seemed to be embarrassed about that,
>>>>> > and wandered away,
>>>>> > on up the sidewalk.
>>>>>
>>>>> > Then when a crack hooker chick
>>>>> > in real shambles came along,
>>>>> > offered to blow me right there for five bucks,
>>>>> > I decided that along with the chilly breeze on my back,
>>>>> > perhaps it was time to pack it up for the night.
>>>>>
>>>>> > I wanted dark, I got dark.
>>>>>
>>>>> > -Will Dockery 2017
>

> Good DAY to you....!

Hello Zod, thanks again for reading and commenting.

Monday is an awful way to spend one seventh of your life.

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