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by: General-Zod - Tue, 8 Nov 2022 22:37 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

> is this new or what ?

Hi again Rachel, I often make adjustments to my poems, and change certain things....

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by: Zod - Tue, 8 Nov 2022 23:16 UTC

On Monday, November 7, 2022 at 5:24:17 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
> Zod wrote:
>
> > On Friday, November 4, 2022 at 5:21:24 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> >> > Will Dockery wrote:
> >> > > > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> >> > > >> Zod wrote:
> >>
> >> > > >>> > > In Shadow
> >> > > >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
> >> > > >>> > >
> >> > > >>> > > In shadows
> >> > > >>> > > they walked
> >> > > >>> > > through the shallows
> >> > > >>> > > where they could be safe.
> >> > > >>> >
> >> > > >>> >
> >> > > >>> > Thank you
> >> > > >>> >
> >> > > >>> > >
> >> > > >>> > > *************
> >> > > >>> I thank you...
> >> > > >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
> >> > >
> >> > > > You are correct....!
> >> > > Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.
> >> > >
> >> > > And so it goes.
> >> > I can write circles around you low life's.
> >> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> >>
> >> Yet, at 76 years old, you still can't learn how to use an apostrophe, Senetto. ^^^^^^
>
> > Jim Senetto is a doofus.... sorry to say....
> He's like Woody Harrelson's younger, dumber brother:
>
> http://indiemusicpeople.com/uploads2/Jim_Senetto_-_Jim_III.jpg

Oh Lordy... ha ha.

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by: Will Dockery - Wed, 9 Nov 2022 04:51 UTC

On Tuesday, November 8, 2022 at 6:16:19 PM UTC-5, Zod wrote:
> On Monday, November 7, 2022 at 5:24:17 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
> > Zod wrote:
> >
> > > On Friday, November 4, 2022 at 5:21:24 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > >> blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> > >> > Will Dockery wrote:
> > >> > > > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > >> > > >> Zod wrote:
> > >>
> > >> > > >>> > > In Shadow
> > >> > > >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
> > >> > > >>> > >
> > >> > > >>> > > In shadows
> > >> > > >>> > > they walked
> > >> > > >>> > > through the shallows
> > >> > > >>> > > where they could be safe.
> > >> > > >>> >
> > >> > > >>> >
> > >> > > >>> > Thank you
> > >> > > >>> >
> > >> > > >>> > >
> > >> > > >>> > > *************
> > >> > > >>> I thank you...
> > >> > > >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
> > >> > >
> > >> > > > You are correct....!
> > >> > > Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.
> > >> > >
> > >> > > And so it goes.
> > >> > I can write circles around you low life's.
> > >> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> > >>
> > >> Yet, at 76 years old, you still can't learn how to use an apostrophe, Senetto. ^^^^^^
> >
> > > Jim Senetto is a doofus.... sorry to say....
> > He's like Woody Harrelson's younger, dumber brother:
> >
> > http://indiemusicpeople.com/uploads2/Jim_Senetto_-_Jim_III.jpg
> Oh Lordy... ha ha.

I know, right?

🙂

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by: W.Dockery - Thu, 24 Nov 2022 22:51 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

> is this new or what ?

Hello again, Rachel, and again, happy Thanksgiving.

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Tue, 29 Nov 2022 22:44 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> Zod wrote:
>
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

Again.... I thank....

> is this new or what ?

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by: W.Dockery - Sat, 3 Dec 2022 20:37 UTC

Rocky Stoneberg wrote:

> Rachel wrote:

>> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>>> In Shadow
>>>
>>> In the Shadows
>>> They walked...
>>> in the shallows
>>> Where they could be safe.
>>>
>>> With a clover plane
>>> Beyond them
>>> With sharp knives
>>> They waited.
>>>
>>> I will be dead
>>> Drink to me
>>> I will not be
>>> Invited to the party.
>>>
>>> -- Zod
>>>
>>> *************

>> cool (but dark)

>> is this new or what ?

> Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....

I've read the original, good job.

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by: General-Zod - Sun, 4 Dec 2022 22:28 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> Zod wrote:
>
>> In Shadow

>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.

>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.

>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.

>> -- Zod

>> *************

> Good one, Zod.

I thank you, another painting made with words.....

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by: Zod - Mon, 5 Dec 2022 22:19 UTC

Rachel wrote:
> Zod wrote:
>
> > In Shadow
> >
> > In the Shadows
> > They walked...
> > in the shallows
> > Where they could be safe.
> >
> > With a clover plane
> > Beyond them
> > With sharp knives
> > They waited.
> >
> > I will be dead
> > Drink to me
> > I will not be
> > Invited to the party.
> >
> > -- Zod
> >
> > *************
> cool (but dark)
>
> is this new or what ?

I thank you kindly...

Hope you return to the group soon....

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by: General-Zod - Tue, 6 Dec 2022 22:51 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
> Zod wrote:
>> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>
>> >> In Shadow
>> >>
>> >> In the Shadows
>> >> They walked...
>> >> in the shallows
>> >> Where they could be safe.
>> > QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?
>> https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows
>>
>> ************
>>
>> often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.
>>
>> ************

> Not surprising that a city slicker monkey like Michael Pendragon wouldn't know what shallows are.

I know that is right....

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by: W-Dockery - Wed, 21 Dec 2022 22:02 UTC

Rachel wrote:
> Zod wrote:
>
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

Agreed, it does set the mood well.

> is this new or what ?

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by: W.Dockery - Sat, 31 Dec 2022 03:00 UTC

Zod wrote:
>
> In Shadow

> In the Shadows
> They walked...
> in the shallows
> Where they could be safe.

> With a clover plane
> Beyond them
> With sharp knives
> They waited.

> I will be dead
> Drink to me
> I will not be
> Invited to the party.

> -- Zod

> *************

Good evening my friend, again, one of your best.

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by: General-Zod - Fri, 6 Jan 2023 22:10 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> On Tuesday, January 3, 2023 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

> is this new or what ?

One of my more coded pieces....

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by: W-Dockery - Sat, 14 Jan 2023 16:36 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Rachel wrote:

>> On Tuesday, January 3, 2023 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>>
>>> In Shadow
>>>
>>> In the Shadows
>>> They walked...
>>> in the shallows
>>> Where they could be safe.
>>>
>>> With a clover plane
>>> Beyond them
>>> With sharp knives
>>> They waited.
>>>
>>> I will be dead
>>> Drink to me
>>> I will not be
>>> Invited to the party.
>>>
>>> -- Zod
>>>
>>> *************

>> cool (but dark)

>> is this new or what ?

> One of my more coded pieces....

Interesting poetic puzzles.

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by: W.Dockery - Sun, 22 Oct 2023 08:01 UTC

Zod wrote:
>
>>> In Shadow
>>>
>>> In the Shadows
>>> They walked...
>>> in the shallows
>>> Where they could be safe.
>>>
>>> With a clover plane
>>> Beyond them
>>> With sharp knives
>>> They waited.
>>>
>>> I will be dead
>>> Drink to me
>>> I will not be
>>> Invited to the party.
>>>
>>> -- Zod
>

> One of my more coded pieces....

Again, a good one.

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by: W.Dockery - Sat, 28 Oct 2023 09:55 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> On Tuesday, October 24, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

Agreed, a good one.

😃

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by: W.Dockery - Sun, 29 Oct 2023 09:45 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

>
>>> In Shadow

>>> In the Shadows
>>> They walked...
>>> in the shallows
>>> Where they could be safe.

>>> With a clover plane
>>> Beyond them
>>> With sharp knives
>>> They waited.

>>> I will be dead
>>> Drink to me
>>> I will not be
>>> Invited to the party.

>>> -- Zod

> another painting made with words.....

Good morning, again, good job.

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by: General-Zod - Thu, 2 Nov 2023 22:01 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> cool (but dark)

> is this new or what ?

Kinda...

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Good morning, keep up the good work, Zod.

😃

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by: W.Dockery - Mon, 13 Nov 2023 01:20 UTC

Victor H. wrote:

> Michael Pendragon wrote:

>> Zod wrote:
>
>>> In Shadow
>>>
>>> In the Shadows
>>> They walked...
>>> in the shallows
>>> Where they could be safe.

>> QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?

> https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows

> ************

> often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.

> ************

Exactly.

🙂

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by: Faraway Star - Mon, 13 Nov 2023 22:09 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
> Victor H. wrote:
> > Michael Pendragon wrote:
> >> Zod wrote:
>
> >>> In Shadow
> >>>
> >>> In the Shadows
> >>> They walked...
> >>> in the shallows
> >>> Where they could be safe.
> >> QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?
>
> > https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows
>
> > ************
>
> > often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.
>
> > ************
> Exactly.

Yes indeed....!

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by: W.Dockery - Sat, 25 Nov 2023 19:42 UTC

Rocky Stoneberg wrote:

> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

>> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> >
>>> > > In Shadow
>>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>>> > >
>>> > > In shadows
>>> > > they walked
>>> > > through the shallows
>>> > > where they could be safe.
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > Thank you
>>> >
>>> > >
>>> > > *************
>>> I thank you...
>> If we don't help one another, all is lost.

> You are correct....!

Good afternoon, agreed.

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Date: Wed, 29 Nov 2023 06:13:18 +0000
Subject: Re: In Shadow, by Zod
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by: W.Dockery - Wed, 29 Nov 2023 06:13 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> cool (but dark)

Agreed.

🙂

> is this new or what ?

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by: General-Zod - Sat, 2 Dec 2023 16:17 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> Rachel wrote:

>> Zod wrote:
>>
>>> In Shadow
>>>
>>> In the Shadows
>>> They walked...
>>> in the shallows
>>> Where they could be safe.
>>>
>>> With a clover plane
>>> Beyond them
>>> With sharp knives
>>> They waited.
>>>
>>> I will be dead
>>> Drink to me
>>> I will not be
>>> Invited to the party.
>>>
>>> -- Zod
>>>
>>> *************

>> cool (but dark)

> Agreed.

> 🙂

>> is this new or what ?

I thank again...!

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by: W.Dockery - Sun, 21 Jan 2024 19:36 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Rachel wrote:

>> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>>
>>> In Shadow
>>>
>>> In the Shadows
>>> They walked...
>>> in the shallows
>>> Where they could be safe.
>>>
>>> With a clover plane
>>> Beyond them
>>> With sharp knives
>>> They waited.
>>>
>>> I will be dead
>>> Drink to me
>>> I will not be
>>> Invited to the party.
>>>
>>> -- Zod
>>>
>>> *************

>> cool (but dark)

>> is this new or what ?

> Hi again Rachel, I often make adjustments to my poems, and change certain things....

Good afternoon, keep up the good work.

😃

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by: General-Zod - Thu, 28 Mar 2024 18:18 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> Zod wrote:
>
>> > >> > > >>> > > In Shadow
>> > >> > > >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>> > >> > > >>> > >
>> > >> > > >>> > > In shadows
>> > >> > > >>> > > they walked
>> > >> > > >>> > > through the shallows
>> > >> > > >>> > > where they could be safe.
>> > >> > > >>> >
>> > >> > > >>> >
>> > >> > > >>> > Thank you

Good day to ya...!

No two persons ever read the same book. -- Edmund Wilson

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