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Ping: Senetto, here's one of my new poems you requested.

https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

"Little Miracles" by Will Dockery

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"Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:

https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

Another recent (new) poem, as requested by Jim Senetto.

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 by: Michael Pendragon - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 14:34 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, W-Dockery wrote:
> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
>
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
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> Another recent (new) poem, as requested by Jim Senetto.

Why do you lie so much, Donkey?

That isn't a poem, and you didn't post it.

You know that Jim *never* clicks on your links. Nor, for that matter, do I..

If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone other than your socks, I suggest that you post it here in full.

(We'll all probably skip and ignore them anyway, but at least you'll have made the effort.)

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 by: W.Dockery - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 18:29 UTC

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, WIll Dockery wrote:
>
>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>>
>> Another recent (new) poem, as requested by Jim Senetto.

>

> You know that Jim *never* clicks on your links

Yes, he has, since he knew details about the poem that he couldn't have known unless Senetto had visited the blog.

HTH and HAND.

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 by: W.Dockery - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 20:45 UTC

Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

> If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> I suggest that you post it here in full.

Okay, here is the full poem:

Little Miracles

Her heart's so heavy
with memory today.
She can write it down as fiction
but she doesn't know what to say.
The cats are on the front porch
they don't listen to her.

What she sees are
the little miracles
that make up her life.
Cell phone haikus
to the ghost of her wife.
Hipster concubines
and neon that lights up the night
it just don't seem right.

Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
as Miss Twila takes note of it all.

What she see is nine to five
as she walks the last mile.
Over and over like Groundhog day
gathering her fingerprint file.
Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
and just go out in style.

The downtown crown in a hologram fight
shadows white-out on white
they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.

Because her heart's so heavy
with memory today.
She can write it down as fiction
but she doesn't know what to say.
The four horsemen of the apocalypse
in line to pay to play.

-Will Dockery (3-21-23

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From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 21:17 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 4:50:17 PM UTC-4, W.Dockery wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> >>
> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> Okay, here is the full poem:
>
>
> Little Miracles
>
> Her heart's so heavy
> with memory today.
> She can write it down as fiction
> but she doesn't know what to say.
> The cats are on the front porch
> they don't listen to her.
>
> What she sees are
> the little miracles
> that make up her life.
> Cell phone haikus
> to the ghost of her wife.
> Hipster concubines
> and neon that lights up the night
> it just don't seem right.
>
> Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
>
> What she see is nine to five
> as she walks the last mile.
> Over and over like Groundhog day
> gathering her fingerprint file.
> Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> and just go out in style.
>
> The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> shadows white-out on white
> they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
>
> Because her heart's so heavy
> with memory today.
> She can write it down as fiction
> but she doesn't know what to say.
> The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> in line to pay to play.
>
> -Will Dockery (3-21-23
>
> ----
> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.

It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.

Try again.

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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 21:23 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:17:59 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 4:50:17 PM UTC-4, W.Dockery wrote:
> > Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > >
> > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > >>
> > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > Okay, here is the full poem:
> >
> >
> > Little Miracles
> >
> > Her heart's so heavy
> > with memory today.
> > She can write it down as fiction
> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > The cats are on the front porch
> > they don't listen to her.
> >
> > What she sees are
> > the little miracles
> > that make up her life.
> > Cell phone haikus
> > to the ghost of her wife.
> > Hipster concubines
> > and neon that lights up the night
> > it just don't seem right.
> >
> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> >
> > What she see is nine to five
> > as she walks the last mile.
> > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > and just go out in style.
> >
> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > shadows white-out on white
> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> >
> > Because her heart's so heavy
> > with memory today.
> > She can write it down as fiction
> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > in line to pay to play.
> >
> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> >
> > ----
> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
>
> It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
>
> Try again.

miracle
noun
mir·​a·​cle ˈmir-i-kəl
Synonyms of miracle
1 : an extraordinary event manifesting divine intervention in human affairs
the healing miracles described in the Gospels
2 : an extremely outstanding or unusual event, thing, or accomplishment
The bridge is a miracle of engineering.
3 Christian Science : a divinely natural phenomenon experienced humanly as the fulfillment of spiritual law

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 by: Will Dockery - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 21:34 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:17:59 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 4:50:17 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > >>
> > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > Okay, here is the full poem:
> >
> >
> > Little Miracles
> >
> > Her heart's so heavy
> > with memory today.
> > She can write it down as fiction
> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > The cats are on the front porch
> > they don't listen to her.
> >
> > What she sees are
> > the little miracles
> > that make up her life.
> > Cell phone haikus
> > to the ghost of her wife.
> > Hipster concubines
> > and neon that lights up the night
> > it just don't seem right.
> >
> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> >
> > What she see is nine to five
> > as she walks the last mile.
> > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > and just go out in style.
> >
> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > shadows white-out on white
> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> >
> > Because her heart's so heavy
> > with memory today.
> > She can write it down as fiction
> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > in line to pay to play.
> >
> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> >
> > ----
> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.

I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're boased against my poetry, as we know.

> It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.

Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
> Try again.

Always... stay tuned for more poetry.

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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 21:47 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:17:59 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 4:50:17 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> > > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > >>
> > > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > >
> > >
> > > Little Miracles
> > >
> > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > with memory today.
> > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > they don't listen to her.
> > >
> > > What she sees are
> > > the little miracles
> > > that make up her life.
> > > Cell phone haikus
> > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > Hipster concubines
> > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > it just don't seem right.
> > >
> > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > >
> > > What she see is nine to five
> > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > and just go out in style.
> > >
> > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > shadows white-out on white
> > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > >
> > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > with memory today.
> > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > in line to pay to play.
> > >
> > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > >
> > > ----
> > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're boased against my poetry, as we know.
> > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
>
> > Try again.
>
> Always... stay tuned for more poetry.

What in the world does asking me if I've tried acid, mean?

My comment on your 'poem' is my comment.

You gave your child bride, acid. I wonder if you'd feed your daughter or grandchild acid to see the pretty colors.

You're a burn-out, face facts.

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Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
>> > >>
>> > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>> > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
>> > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
>> > Okay, here is the full poem:
>> >
>> >
>> > Little Miracles
>> >
>> > Her heart's so heavy
>> > with memory today.
>> > She can write it down as fiction
>> > but she doesn't know what to say.
>> > The cats are on the front porch
>> > they don't listen to her.
>> >
>> > What she sees are
>> > the little miracles
>> > that make up her life.
>> > Cell phone haikus
>> > to the ghost of her wife.
>> > Hipster concubines
>> > and neon that lights up the night
>> > it just don't seem right.
>> >
>> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
>> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
>> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
>> >
>> > What she see is nine to five
>> > as she walks the last mile.
>> > Over and over like Groundhog day
>> > gathering her fingerprint file.
>> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
>> > and just go out in style.
>> >
>> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
>> > shadows white-out on white
>> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
>> >
>> > Because her heart's so heavy
>> > with memory today.
>> > She can write it down as fiction
>> > but she doesn't know what to say.
>> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
>> > in line to pay to play.
>> >
>> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
>> >
>> > ----
>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>
> Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.

I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're biased against my poetry, as we know.

> It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.

Have you even tried acid, Senetto?

> Try again.

Always... stay tuned for more poetry.

(Typo corrected.)

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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 22:00 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:51:42 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > Will Dockery wrote:
> >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> >> > Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> >> > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> >> > >>
> >> > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> >> > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> >> > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> >> > Okay, here is the full poem:
> >> >
> >> >
> >> > Little Miracles
> >> >
> >> > Her heart's so heavy
> >> > with memory today.
> >> > She can write it down as fiction
> >> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> >> > The cats are on the front porch
> >> > they don't listen to her.
> >> >
> >> > What she sees are
> >> > the little miracles
> >> > that make up her life.
> >> > Cell phone haikus
> >> > to the ghost of her wife.
> >> > Hipster concubines
> >> > and neon that lights up the night
> >> > it just don't seem right.
> >> >
> >> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> >> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> >> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> >> >
> >> > What she see is nine to five
> >> > as she walks the last mile.
> >> > Over and over like Groundhog day
> >> > gathering her fingerprint file.
> >> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> >> > and just go out in style.
> >> >
> >> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> >> > shadows white-out on white
> >> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> >> >
> >> > Because her heart's so heavy
> >> > with memory today.
> >> > She can write it down as fiction
> >> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> >> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> >> > in line to pay to play.
> >> >
> >> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> >> >
> >> > ----
> >> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> >
> > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're biased against my poetry, as we know.
> > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
>
> Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
>
> > Try again.
>
> Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
> (Typo corrected.)

Do not link it...present the full poem.

You had mentioned that you thought Corey had about 5 good poems. I think you have none.

Anyone can call themselves poet or even singer in a band, the proof, they say, is in the pudding, no matter how Dance says it.

I don't believe you can sing and I don't believe you are a poet of any notice.

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 by: Will Dockery - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 22:15 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 6:00:59 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:51:42 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > Will Dockery wrote:
> > >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > >> > Will Dockery wrote:
> > >
> > >> > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > >> > >>
> > >> > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles..html?m=0
> > >> > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > >> > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > >> > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > >> >
> > >> >
> > >> > Little Miracles
> > >> >
> > >> > Her heart's so heavy
> > >> > with memory today.
> > >> > She can write it down as fiction
> > >> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > >> > The cats are on the front porch
> > >> > they don't listen to her.
> > >> >
> > >> > What she sees are
> > >> > the little miracles
> > >> > that make up her life.
> > >> > Cell phone haikus
> > >> > to the ghost of her wife.
> > >> > Hipster concubines
> > >> > and neon that lights up the night
> > >> > it just don't seem right.
> > >> >
> > >> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > >> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > >> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > >> >
> > >> > What she see is nine to five
> > >> > as she walks the last mile.
> > >> > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > >> > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > >> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > >> > and just go out in style.
> > >> >
> > >> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > >> > shadows white-out on white
> > >> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > >> >
> > >> > Because her heart's so heavy
> > >> > with memory today.
> > >> > She can write it down as fiction
> > >> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > >> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > >> > in line to pay to play.
> > >> >
> > >> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > >> >
> > >> > ----
> > >> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > >
> > > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> > I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're biased against my poetry, as we know.
> > > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> >
> > Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
> >
> > > Try again.
> >
> > Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
> > (Typo corrected.)
> Do not link it...present the full poem

I probably will.

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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 22:17 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 6:15:54 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 6:00:59 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:51:42 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > > Will Dockery wrote:
> > > >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > >> > Will Dockery wrote:
> > > >
> > > >> > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > >> > >>
> > > >> > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > >> > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > >> > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > >> > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > > >> >
> > > >> >
> > > >> > Little Miracles
> > > >> >
> > > >> > Her heart's so heavy
> > > >> > with memory today.
> > > >> > She can write it down as fiction
> > > >> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > >> > The cats are on the front porch
> > > >> > they don't listen to her.
> > > >> >
> > > >> > What she sees are
> > > >> > the little miracles
> > > >> > that make up her life.
> > > >> > Cell phone haikus
> > > >> > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > >> > Hipster concubines
> > > >> > and neon that lights up the night
> > > >> > it just don't seem right.
> > > >> >
> > > >> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > >> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > >> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > >> >
> > > >> > What she see is nine to five
> > > >> > as she walks the last mile.
> > > >> > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > >> > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > >> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > >> > and just go out in style.
> > > >> >
> > > >> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > >> > shadows white-out on white
> > > >> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > >> >
> > > >> > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > >> > with memory today.
> > > >> > She can write it down as fiction
> > > >> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > >> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > >> > in line to pay to play.
> > > >> >
> > > >> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > >> >
> > > >> > ----
> > > >> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > >
> > > > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> > > I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're biased against my poetry, as we know.
> > > > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> > >
> > > Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
> > >
> > > > Try again.
> > >
> > > Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
> > > (Typo corrected.)
> > Do not link it...present the full poem
> I probably will.

Bring it on.

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 by: Will Dockery - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 22:20 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 6:17:06 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 6:15:54 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > > > >> > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > > >> > >>
> > > > >> > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > >> > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > > >> > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > > >> > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > Little Miracles
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > >> > with memory today.
> > > > >> > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > >> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > >> > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > >> > they don't listen to her.
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > What she sees are
> > > > >> > the little miracles
> > > > >> > that make up her life.
> > > > >> > Cell phone haikus
> > > > >> > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > >> > Hipster concubines
> > > > >> > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > >> > it just don't seem right.
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > >> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > >> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > What she see is nine to five
> > > > >> > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > >> > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > >> > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > >> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > >> > and just go out in style.
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > >> > shadows white-out on white
> > > > >> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > >> > with memory today.
> > > > >> > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > >> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > >> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > >> > in line to pay to play.
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > > >> >
> > > > >> > ----
> > > > >> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>
> > > Do not link it...present the full poem
> > I probably will.
> Bring it on.

Okay, I just posted "On Mulberry Drive":, full poem:
https://groups.google.com/g/alt.arts.poetry.comments/c/dZZYtvwzSqI/m/PwyhDdthAQAJ

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 by: Will Dockery - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 22:48 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:23:17 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:17:59 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > >
> > > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > >>
> > > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > >
> > >
> > > Little Miracles
> > >
> > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > with memory today.
> > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > they don't listen to her.
> > >
> > > What she sees are
> > > the little miracles
> > > that make up her life.
> > > Cell phone haikus
> > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > Hipster concubines
> > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > it just don't seem right.
> > >
> > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > >
> > > What she see is nine to five
> > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > and just go out in style.
> > >
> > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > shadows white-out on white
> > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > >
> > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > with memory today.
> > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > in line to pay to play.
> > >
> > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > >
> > > ----
> > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> >
> > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> >
> > Try again.
> miracle
> noun
> mir·​a·​cle ˈmir-i-kəl
> Synonyms of miracle
> 1
> : an extraordinary event manifesting divine intervention in human affairs
> the healing miracles described in the Gospels
> 2
> : an extremely outstanding or unusual event, thing, or accomplishment
> The bridge is a miracle of engineering.
> 3
> Christian Science : a divinely natural phenomenon experienced humanly as the fulfillment of spiritual law

Look up "Poetic License".

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Artistic_license

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On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:47:11 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:17:59 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 4:50:17 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > > > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > > >>
> > > > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > Little Miracles
> > > >
> > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > with memory today.
> > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > they don't listen to her.
> > > >
> > > > What she sees are
> > > > the little miracles
> > > > that make up her life.
> > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > it just don't seem right.
> > > >
> > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > >
> > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > and just go out in style.
> > > >
> > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > >
> > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > with memory today.
> > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > in line to pay to play.
> > > >
> > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > >
> > > > ----
> > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> > I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're boased against my poetry, as we know.
> > > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> > Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
> >
> > > Try again.
> >
> > Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
> What in the world does asking me if I've tried acid, mean?

You can't really understand the effects of LSD if you've never experienced it.

The Beatles and the Rolling Stones used it, among many others, and it really didn't harm most of them at all.

> My comment on your 'poem' is my comment.
>
> You gave your child bride, acid

We were both young and wanted to try what the other kids were having fun with.

So you were afraid to try it?

If you were afraid, that's okay.

> I wonder if you'd feed your daughter or grandchild acid to see the pretty colors.

No, I would not.

> You're a burn-out, face facts.

Right, and at 76 years old you're as fresh as a daisy, face facts, you're an old codger just like me, Senetto.

HTH and HAND.

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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 23:13 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:02:01 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:47:11 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:17:59 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 4:50:17 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> > > > > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > > > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > > > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Little Miracles
> > > > >
> > > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > > they don't listen to her.
> > > > >
> > > > > What she sees are
> > > > > the little miracles
> > > > > that make up her life.
> > > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > > it just don't seem right.
> > > > >
> > > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > > >
> > > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > > and just go out in style.
> > > > >
> > > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > > >
> > > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > > in line to pay to play.
> > > > >
> > > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > > >
> > > > > ----
> > > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> > > I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're boased against my poetry, as we know.
> > > > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> > > Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
> > >
> > > > Try again.
> > >
> > > Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
> > What in the world does asking me if I've tried acid, mean?
> You can't really understand the effects of LSD if you've never experienced it.
>
> The Beatles and the Rolling Stones used it, among many others, and it really didn't harm most of them at all.
> > My comment on your 'poem' is my comment.
> >
> > You gave your child bride, acid
> We were both young and wanted to try what the other kids were having fun with.
>
> So you were afraid to try it?
>
> If you were afraid, that's okay.
> > I wonder if you'd feed your daughter or grandchild acid to see the pretty colors.
> No, I would not.
> > You're a burn-out, face facts.
> Right, and at 76 years old you're as fresh as a daisy, face facts, you're an old codger just like me, Senetto.
>
> HTH and HAND.

My young life was filled with spills and thrills, I didn't much care what the Beatles and Stones were up to, except the music.

My life style has kept me youthful and vibrant, your seems to have put age on fast forward.

I redid your poem, to my liking

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 by: Will Dockery - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 23:22 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:13:58 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:02:01 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:47:11 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > > > > > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > > > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > > > > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > > > > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Little Miracles
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > > > they don't listen to her.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > What she sees are
> > > > > > the little miracles
> > > > > > that make up her life.
> > > > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > > > it just don't seem right.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > > > and just go out in style.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > > > in line to pay to play.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > > > >
> > > > > > ----
> > > > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles..html?m=0
> > > > > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> > > > I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're boased against my poetry, as we know.
> > > > > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> > > > Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
> > > >
> > > > > Try again.
> > > >
> > > > Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
> > > What in the world does asking me if I've tried acid, mean?
> > You can't really understand the effects of LSD if you've never experienced it.
> >
> > The Beatles and the Rolling Stones used it, among many others, and it really didn't harm most of them at all.
> > > My comment on your 'poem' is my comment.
> > >
> > > You gave your child bride, acid
> > We were both young and wanted to try what the other kids were having fun with.
> >
> > So you were afraid to try it?
> >
> > If you were afraid, that's okay.
> > > I wonder if you'd feed your daughter or grandchild acid to see the pretty colors.
> > No, I would not.
> > > You're a burn-out, face facts.
> > Right, and at 76 years old you're as fresh as a daisy, face facts, you're an old codger just like me, Senetto.
> >
> > HTH and HAND.
> My young life was filled with spills and thrills, I didn't much care what the Beatles and Stones were up to, except the music.

You do know that LSdefinitely influenced the music, though, I'm sure.

> My life style has kept me youthful and vibrant, your seems to have put age on fast forward.

I don't agree, I am getting back to the stage, did a poetry reading last week, I'm not finished yet.

> I redid your poem, to my liking

Thanks for reading, glad you liked.

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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Wed, 14 Jun 2023 23:43 UTC

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:22:19 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:13:58 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:02:01 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:47:11 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> > > > > > > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > > > > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > > > > > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > > > > > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Little Miracles
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > > > > they don't listen to her.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > What she sees are
> > > > > > > the little miracles
> > > > > > > that make up her life.
> > > > > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > > > > it just don't seem right.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > > > > and just go out in style.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > > > > in line to pay to play.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > ----
> > > > > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > > > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> > > > > I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're boased against my poetry, as we know.
> > > > > > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> > > > > Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
> > > > >
> > > > > > Try again.
> > > > >
> > > > > Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
> > > > What in the world does asking me if I've tried acid, mean?
> > > You can't really understand the effects of LSD if you've never experienced it.
> > >
> > > The Beatles and the Rolling Stones used it, among many others, and it really didn't harm most of them at all.
> > > > My comment on your 'poem' is my comment.
> > > >
> > > > You gave your child bride, acid
> > > We were both young and wanted to try what the other kids were having fun with.
> > >
> > > So you were afraid to try it?
> > >
> > > If you were afraid, that's okay.
> > > > I wonder if you'd feed your daughter or grandchild acid to see the pretty colors.
> > > No, I would not.
> > > > You're a burn-out, face facts.
> > > Right, and at 76 years old you're as fresh as a daisy, face facts, you're an old codger just like me, Senetto.
> > >
> > > HTH and HAND.
> > My young life was filled with spills and thrills, I didn't much care what the Beatles and Stones were up to, except the music.
> You do know that LSdefinitely influenced the music, though, I'm sure.
> > My life style has kept me youthful and vibrant, your seems to have put age on fast forward.
> I don't agree, I am getting back to the stage, did a poetry reading last week, I'm not finished yet.
> > I redid your poem, to my liking
> Thanks for reading, glad you liked.

I didn't like....I rewrote it, then I liked.

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 by: W.Dockery - Thu, 15 Jun 2023 02:12 UTC

Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:22:19 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:13:58 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:02:01 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:47:11 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>> > > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > > > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
>> > > > > > > >>
>> > > > > > > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>> > > > > > > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
>> > > > > > > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
>> > > > > > > Okay, here is the full poem:
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > Little Miracles
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > Her heart's so heavy
>> > > > > > > with memory today.
>> > > > > > > She can write it down as fiction
>> > > > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
>> > > > > > > The cats are on the front porch
>> > > > > > > they don't listen to her.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > What she sees are
>> > > > > > > the little miracles
>> > > > > > > that make up her life.
>> > > > > > > Cell phone haikus
>> > > > > > > to the ghost of her wife.
>> > > > > > > Hipster concubines
>> > > > > > > and neon that lights up the night
>> > > > > > > it just don't seem right.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
>> > > > > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
>> > > > > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > What she see is nine to five
>> > > > > > > as she walks the last mile.
>> > > > > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
>> > > > > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
>> > > > > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
>> > > > > > > and just go out in style.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
>> > > > > > > shadows white-out on white
>> > > > > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > Because her heart's so heavy
>> > > > > > > with memory today.
>> > > > > > > She can write it down as fiction
>> > > > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
>> > > > > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
>> > > > > > > in line to pay to play.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > ----
>> > > > > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> > > > > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>> > > > > > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
>> > > > > I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're boased against my poetry, as we know.
>> > > > > > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
>> > > > > Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
>> > > > >
>> > > > > > Try again.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
>> > > > What in the world does asking me if I've tried acid, mean?
>> > > You can't really understand the effects of LSD if you've never experienced it.
>> > >
>> > > The Beatles and the Rolling Stones used it, among many others, and it really didn't harm most of them at all.
>> > > > My comment on your 'poem' is my comment.
>> > > >
>> > > > You gave your child bride, acid
>> > > We were both young and wanted to try what the other kids were having fun with.
>> > >
>> > > So you were afraid to try it?
>> > >
>> > > If you were afraid, that's okay.
>> > > > I wonder if you'd feed your daughter or grandchild acid to see the pretty colors.
>> > > No, I would not.
>> > > > You're a burn-out, face facts.
>> > > Right, and at 76 years old you're as fresh as a daisy, face facts, you're an old codger just like me, Senetto.
>> > >
>> > > HTH and HAND.
>> > My young life was filled with spills and thrills, I didn't much care what the Beatles and Stones were up to, except the music.
>> You do know that LSdefinitely influenced the music, though, I'm sure.
>> > My life style has kept me youthful and vibrant, your seems to have put age on fast forward.
>> I don't agree, I am getting back to the stage, did a poetry reading last week, I'm not finished yet.
>> > I redid your poem, to my liking
>> Thanks for reading, glad you liked.

> I didn't like....I rewrote it, then I liked.

Okay, I'm back home at the office now, I'll have a look at your rewrite.

Thanks again.

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 by: W.Dockery - Thu, 15 Jun 2023 18:21 UTC

Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
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> His first 'off the cuff' post on all things in the Dockery life was almost written
> with a certain pride, his belief that Kerouac had it right and as far as he was concerned, he would follow that lead.

Yes, I still think Jack Kerouac was on the right track with his writing. Not his life, I'll specify.

(Moved from the troll thread.)

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 by: Michael Pendragon - Thu, 15 Jun 2023 18:51 UTC

On Thursday, June 15, 2023 at 2:25:14 PM UTC-4, W.Dockery wrote:
> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> >
> > His first 'off the cuff' post on all things in the Dockery life was almost written
> > with a certain pride, his belief that Kerouac had it right and as far as he was concerned, he would follow that lead.
>
> Yes, I still think Jack Kerouac was on the right track with his writing. Not his life, I'll specify.

Not many people consider Kerouac to have been a very good writer. They claim that his one generally known book, "On the Road," was significant and hugely influential on the "drop out generation" of the 1960s.

Note that he wasn't influential of his fellow writers, so much as he was influential in getting teenagers to take drugs, leave home, and hitchhike across the country.

Kerouac's writing style is only marginally more complex than the "Fun With Dick and Jane" books used to teach kindergartners and first graders how to read.

That said, your own writing falls astounding short of that of your idol. He wrote in sentences (as opposed to your sentence fragments) and coherently (as opposed to your unintelligible gibberish).

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 by: W-Dockery - Thu, 15 Jun 2023 19:15 UTC

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Thursday, June 15, 2023 at 2:25:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>
>> > His first 'off the cuff' post on all things in the Dockery life was almost written
>> > with a certain pride, his belief that Kerouac had it right and as far as he was concerned, he would follow that lead.
>>
>> Yes, I still think Jack Kerouac was on the right track with his writing. Not his life, I'll specify.

> Not many people consider Kerouac to have been a very good writer

That's the same delusional and ignorant thinking that leads you to actually believe that you're a better poet than such master poets as E.E. Cummings, William Carlos Williams and T.S. Eliot, Pendragon.

And so it goes.

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 by: W-Dockery - Fri, 16 Jun 2023 03:15 UTC

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, W-Dockery wrote:
>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>>
>> Another recent (new) poem, as requested by Jim Senetto.

> Why do you

Look who's talking, Michael Pendragon, the ignorant, delusional little fuckwit monkey.

🙂

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 by: W.Dockery - Fri, 16 Jun 2023 18:35 UTC

Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
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> His first 'off the cuff' post on all things in the Dockery life was almost written
> with a certain pride, his belief that Kerouac had it right and as far as he was concerned, he would follow that lead.

Like I said, I still think Jack Kerouac was on the right track with his writing.

Not his life, I'll specify.

HTH and HAND.

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