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* Re: At the Taco Stand / Will DockeryFaraway Star
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Subject: Re: At the Taco Stand / Will Dockery
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 by: Faraway Star - Fri, 11 Aug 2023 18:43 UTC

On Saturday, September 7, 2019 at 6:54:15 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> On Saturday, September 7, 2019 at 12:47:10 AM UTC-4, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Friday, September 6, 2019 at 5:24:24 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> > > > > > On Thursday, September 5, 2019 at 4:00:18 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
>
> > > > > > > Because of the subject-verb agreement. You don't have to follow that grammatical rule any more than Sir Paul ("Man We Was Lonely") McCartney had to; but since some primates like to call you an illiterate pissbum etc., you might want to do something about that. Then again, you might not want to; your choice.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > You're the editor, and obviously thought it out to come to this conclusion, that this is the very best version of the poem I can get:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > https://pennyspoetry.fandom.com/wiki/Sandbox:_Act_of_Will_part_1
> > > > > >
> > > > > > At the Taco Stand
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I often think of my past and the best tacos
> > > > > > I'd share with Kathy down on Victory Drive
> > > > > > where the taco stand stood 40 years ago.
> > > > > > The Thursday special was a buck for five
> > > > > > back then at Buena Vista taco stand,
> > > > > > near Zodiac and Mickey's, on music row.
> > > > > > At the little table there I'd hold her hand
> > > > > > eating a taco after the rock show.
> > > > > > The red and green sauce there were made from scratch,
> > > > > > hard to decide on which, both mighty fine
> > > > > > though we agreed the green sauce had no match,
> > > > > > sharing our feast, her eyes staring into mine . . .
> > > > > > Nostalgia, alone with chilling wind
> > > > > > and visions of my Lady Katherine.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > -Will Dockery
> > > > > >
> > > > > > So, I'm making the choice of leaving the editing of a sonnet up to you, George, as I make no claims to be an expert on that poetry form.
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you for the vote of confidence. I'll mull it around and pick one.
> > > >
> > > > Yes, I'd like to see that you, the "director" gives us the best cut possible on Will Dockery poems.
> > >
> > > Frankly, it's pedantic and it's been beaten to death. For fun tonight, I thought i'd do some searches to see how many people say "red and green sauce are" or "both red and green sauce".
> > >
> > > "red and green sauce are" - About 10,600 results
> >
> > I just ran the same search. The results are from Yelp, Trip Advisor and Google Books. IOW: A lot of illiterate morons post on Yelp, Trip Advisor and Google Books. Just as a lot of illiterate pissbums post here.
> And Wikipedia, don't forget: so many "illiterate pissbums" writing and reading there, too. It must get so frustrating for you.

Indeed... indeed...

Re: At the Taco Stand / Will Dockery

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Subject: Re: At the Taco Stand / Will Dockery
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 by: Michael Pendragon - Fri, 11 Aug 2023 19:53 UTC

On Friday, August 11, 2023 at 2:43:34 PM UTC-4, Faraway Star wrote:
> On Saturday, September 7, 2019 at 6:54:15 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> > On Saturday, September 7, 2019 at 12:47:10 AM UTC-4, Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > On Friday, September 6, 2019 at 5:24:24 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> > > > > > > On Thursday, September 5, 2019 at 4:00:18 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
> >
> > > > > > > > Because of the subject-verb agreement. You don't have to follow that grammatical rule any more than Sir Paul ("Man We Was Lonely") McCartney had to; but since some primates like to call you an illiterate pissbum etc., you might want to do something about that. Then again, you might not want to; your choice.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > You're the editor, and obviously thought it out to come to this conclusion, that this is the very best version of the poem I can get:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > https://pennyspoetry.fandom.com/wiki/Sandbox:_Act_of_Will_part_1
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > At the Taco Stand
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > I often think of my past and the best tacos
> > > > > > > I'd share with Kathy down on Victory Drive
> > > > > > > where the taco stand stood 40 years ago.
> > > > > > > The Thursday special was a buck for five
> > > > > > > back then at Buena Vista taco stand,
> > > > > > > near Zodiac and Mickey's, on music row.
> > > > > > > At the little table there I'd hold her hand
> > > > > > > eating a taco after the rock show.
> > > > > > > The red and green sauce there were made from scratch,
> > > > > > > hard to decide on which, both mighty fine
> > > > > > > though we agreed the green sauce had no match,
> > > > > > > sharing our feast, her eyes staring into mine . . .
> > > > > > > Nostalgia, alone with chilling wind
> > > > > > > and visions of my Lady Katherine.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > -Will Dockery
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > So, I'm making the choice of leaving the editing of a sonnet up to you, George, as I make no claims to be an expert on that poetry form.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Thank you for the vote of confidence. I'll mull it around and pick one.
> > > > >
> > > > > Yes, I'd like to see that you, the "director" gives us the best cut possible on Will Dockery poems.
> > > >
> > > > Frankly, it's pedantic and it's been beaten to death. For fun tonight, I thought i'd do some searches to see how many people say "red and green sauce are" or "both red and green sauce".
> > > >
> > > > "red and green sauce are" - About 10,600 results
> > >
> > > I just ran the same search. The results are from Yelp, Trip Advisor and Google Books. IOW: A lot of illiterate morons post on Yelp, Trip Advisor and Google Books. Just as a lot of illiterate pissbums post here.
> > And Wikipedia, don't forget: so many "illiterate pissbums" writing and reading there, too. It must get so frustrating for you.
>
> Indeed... indeed...

I don't think there's ever been any question that the majority of people are illiterate. I believe that George (or whoever you're quoting) is mistaken about the number of pissbums, though. Only about 5.8 million Americans are unemployed, which translates to 3/5%.

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 by: General-Zod - Fri, 11 Aug 2023 20:09 UTC

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Friday, August 11, 2023 at 2:43:34 PM UTC-4, Faraway Star wrote:
>> On Saturday, September 7, 2019 at 6:54:15 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
>> > On Saturday, September 7, 2019 at 12:47:10 AM UTC-4, Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> > > On Friday, September 6, 2019 at 5:24:24 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
>> > > > > > > On Thursday, September 5, 2019 at 4:00:18 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > > > > Because of the subject-verb agreement. You don't have to follow that grammatical rule any more than Sir Paul ("Man We Was Lonely") McCartney had to; but since some primates like to call you an illiterate pissbum etc., you might want to do something about that. Then again, you might not want to; your choice.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > You're the editor, and obviously thought it out to come to this conclusion, that this is the very best version of the poem I can get:
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > https://pennyspoetry.fandom.com/wiki/Sandbox:_Act_of_Will_part_1
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > At the Taco Stand
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > I often think of my past and the best tacos
>> > > > > > > I'd share with Kathy down on Victory Drive
>> > > > > > > where the taco stand stood 40 years ago.
>> > > > > > > The Thursday special was a buck for five
>> > > > > > > back then at Buena Vista taco stand,
>> > > > > > > near Zodiac and Mickey's, on music row.
>> > > > > > > At the little table there I'd hold her hand
>> > > > > > > eating a taco after the rock show.
>> > > > > > > The red and green sauce there were made from scratch,
>> > > > > > > hard to decide on which, both mighty fine
>> > > > > > > though we agreed the green sauce had no match,
>> > > > > > > sharing our feast, her eyes staring into mine . . .
>> > > > > > > Nostalgia, alone with chilling wind
>> > > > > > > and visions of my Lady Katherine.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > -Will Dockery
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > So, I'm making the choice of leaving the editing of a sonnet up to you, George, as I make no claims to be an expert on that poetry form.
>> > > > > >
>> > > > > > Thank you for the vote of confidence. I'll mull it around and pick one.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > Yes, I'd like to see that you, the "director" gives us the best cut possible on Will Dockery poems.
>> > > >
>> > > > Frankly, it's pedantic and it's been beaten to death. For fun tonight, I thought i'd do some searches to see how many people say "red and green sauce are" or "both red and green sauce".
>> > > >
>> > > > "red and green sauce are" - About 10,600 results
>> > >
>> > > I just ran the same search. The results are from Yelp, Trip Advisor and Google Books. IOW: A lot of illiterate morons post on Yelp, Trip Advisor and Google Books. Just as a lot of illiterate pissbums post here.
>> > And Wikipedia, don't forget: so many "illiterate pissbums" writing and reading there, too. It must get so frustrating for you.
>>
>> Indeed... indeed...

> I don't think there's ever been any question that the majority of people are illiterate. I believe that George (or whoever you're quoting) is mistaken about the number of pissbums, though. Only about 5.8 million Americans are unemployed, which translates to 3/5%.

That is a shame, I don't know how I'd be able to carry on with reading my poetry and prose...

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