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by: Faraway Star - Tue, 28 Nov 2023 21:03 UTC

George J. Dance wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
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> > Your scrutiny of my poetry is appreciated, my friends.
> >
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> I was busy getting my piece ready for the Sampler, the last few days. Anyway, that's all done.
>
> I like this poem; it's very calm, peaceful, with ordinary imagery: magnolias, Spanish moss, and old church - not at all like your norm - so it sticks out, in a good way. It would make a great ending.
>
> I remember the question of whether to capitalize nouns coming up before, so I'll have to mention 'magnolia' shouldn't have one. OTOH 'Spanish moss' does get one.

Interesting back story...!

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Date: Sun, 31 Dec 2023 23:18:14 +0000
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by: W.Dockery - Sun, 31 Dec 2023 23:18 UTC

Faraway Star wrote:

> George J. Dance wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> > Your scrutiny of my poetry is appreciated, my friends.
>> >
>>
>> I was busy getting my piece ready for the Sampler, the last few days. Anyway, that's all done.
>>
>> I like this poem; it's very calm, peaceful, with ordinary imagery: magnolias, Spanish moss, and old church - not at all like your norm - so it sticks out, in a good way. It would make a great ending.
>>
>> I remember the question of whether to capitalize nouns coming up before, so I'll have to mention 'magnolia' shouldn't have one. OTOH 'Spanish moss' does get one.

> Interesting back story...!

Good evening my friend, thanks again for the nod.

Sin has many tools, but a lie is the handle which fits them all.

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Re: A Certain Music / Will Dockery	Faraway Star
Re: A Certain Music / Will Dockery	W.Dockery