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 by: % - Mon, 19 Feb 2024 15:00 UTC

Faraway Star wrote:
> On Thursday, February 15, 2024 at 8:50:16 PM UTC-5, cheesetray wrote:
>>
>> oops there's a typo in there so sorry!!! hang on.....
>> Operation Bloodless
>> (response to nancy)
>>
>>
>>
>> phonemes charging...collected army of
>> hungry lit sounds burst forth, bearing
>> sharp swords, assault of blades flashing
>> and slashing, thorny-armed terrorists
>> wielding surgical lasers...sabres which
>> beam and mock, mirror and swipe
>> with calculated precision. they slice
>> and cut deep, into rough stale banks
>> of human brain joined at river’s edge
>>
>> rogue militant mission, of growling stomach
>> stampede, a serial procession, divine particle
>> cascade of raging cowman vomit
>> spurs rote streams spinning through
>> desolate indifferent swampland
>> abused soil of sandy desert and abandoned dirt
>> a mounted scalding attack led by
>> sticky torches burning deep below the coordinates
>> of creation’s ground zero, scouring petrified
>> bovine dung and buried leaves which are now
>> all choking…on the smoke...of viper venom
>>
>> unraveling threads recoiling, ravaged
>> in instant shock, from this suffocating heat
>> surge of liquid flame loosed on stung conscience,
>> by the blind pricking, piercing
>> of mercenaries, employed en masse for
>> merciless molecular mutilation
>>
>> designer rockets delegating a multi-millennial
>> build-up of manufactured homeland waste
>> from savage cactus fire send toxic flares...
>> their crafted arrows, carrying chemicals
>> from forsaken high voltage electric needles
>> pound across peals of vaulted sky, striking
>> embowed short-circuited professional agents
>> of authority, meticulously marking
>> mapped out morals for these ground
>> controlled messenger vehicles of rectifying
>> mystery spikes and metaphysics from spines
>> which rattle and hiss. they surround and
>> rain down in unison, upon unsuspecting
>> shaking venison victims
>>
>> injections of pacifying poison
>> numb and shrink the dyed agar
>> membranes of lifeless dumb
>> prisoners of names
>> all rounded up and stranded
>> silos of stentorian acid stinging
>> and singeing their neural skins
>> escorting them, in their season
>> to carefully doctored death
>> time notarized, inside
>> the charred detritus compost
>> of collective mind
>>
>> blackened scarred ego cracks
>> and is momently ruptured
>> by young shoots of courage
>> fiery rods sent to grasp and bloom
>> in unknown far-off fertile fields
>> unearthed by vindicated corporation
>> of constructed confusion
>> and the ominous cries of inflexible
>> internalized coincidence
>>
>> rays of pitched sparks fly, offering up
>> new memory, darkly etched
>> under quivering animal moonlight
>> recorded holy chains of ancient blood
>> carved out of the steely
>> milk-white night
>> and seeping...into art strokes
>> of my soul’s last breath
>>
>>
>> רחל
>> 10.15.23
>> for SAM
>
> Another read, outstanding......
>
>
play your cards right and maybe rachel aka cheesetray will allow you
to give her a hot urine shower on her head next time


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