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Re: In Shadow, by Zod

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 by: Victor H. - Fri, 7 Oct 2022 21:00 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:41:38 PM UTC-4, Family Guy wrote:
>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:37:13 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>> >
>> > > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> > >> In Shadow
>> >
>> > > My first stanza thoughts:
>> > >>
>> > >> In shadows
>> > >> they walked
>> > >> through the shallows
>> > >> where they could be safe.
>> >
>> >
>> > > Thank you
>> >
>> > >>
>> > >> *************
>> > Looks good, Senetto.
>> A stupid comment from Will Dockery?

> A stupid troll post from Alex Cain?

Perish the thought....!

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 by: Zod - Mon, 10 Oct 2022 18:51 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

Hi there Rachel THX again....!

> is this new or what ?

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 by: Victor H. - Tue, 11 Oct 2022 22:04 UTC

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 6:30:08 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>>
>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> >
>> >> In Shadow
>> >>
>> >> In the Shadows
>> >> They walked...
>> >> in the shallows
>> >> Where they could be safe.
>> > QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?
>> https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows
>>
>> ************
>>
>> often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.
>>
>> ************

> Very good! You've found a definition for "shallows."

It was part of my poem after all....!

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 by: General-Zod - Fri, 14 Oct 2022 21:37 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 6:30:08 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>>
>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> >
>> >> In Shadow
>> >>
>> >> In the Shadows
>> >> They walked...
>> >> in the shallows
>> >> Where they could be safe.
>> > QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?
>> https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows
>>
>> ************
>>
>> often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.
>>
>> ************

> Not surprising that a city slicker monkey like Michael Pendragon wouldn't know what shallows are.

> 🙂

Ha ha.

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 by: W-Dockery - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 01:27 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Michael Pendragon wrote:

>> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>
>>> In Shadow
>>>
>>> In the Shadows
>>> They walked...
>>> in the shallows
>>> Where they could be safe.

>> QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?

> https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows

> ************

> often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.

> ************

Well put.

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 by: Zod Zodly - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 20:07 UTC

On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 12:30:16 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Zod wrote:
>
> > Michael Pendragon wrote:
>
> >> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >>
> >>> In Shadow
> >>>
> >>> In the Shadows
> >>> They walked...
> >>> in the shallows
> >>> Where they could be safe.
>
>
>
> >> QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?
>
> > https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows
>
> > ************
>
> > often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.
>
> > ************
> Well put.

I thank....

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 by: Rachel - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 20:17 UTC

On Sunday, October 2, 2022 at 2:10:12 PM UTC-7, Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
> Rachel wrote:
>
> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
> >> In Shadow
> >>
> >> In the Shadows
> >> They walked...
> >> in the shallows
> >> Where they could be safe.
> >>
> >> With a clover plane
> >> Beyond them
> >> With sharp knives
> >> They waited.
> >>
> >> I will be dead
> >> Drink to me
> >> I will not be
> >> Invited to the party.
> >>
> >> -- Zod
> >>
> >> *************
>
> > cool (but dark)
>
> > is this new or what ?
> Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....

significantly refurbished from an older version, or refurbished mostly in meaning/intention for the occasion?

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 by: Rachel - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 20:18 UTC

On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:17:55 PM UTC-7, Rachel wrote:
> On Sunday, October 2, 2022 at 2:10:12 PM UTC-7, Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
> > Rachel wrote:
> >
> > > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
> > >> In Shadow
> > >>
> > >> In the Shadows
> > >> They walked...
> > >> in the shallows
> > >> Where they could be safe.
> > >>
> > >> With a clover plane
> > >> Beyond them
> > >> With sharp knives
> > >> They waited.
> > >>
> > >> I will be dead
> > >> Drink to me
> > >> I will not be
> > >> Invited to the party.
> > >>
> > >> -- Zod
> > >>
> > >> *************
> >
> > > cool (but dark)
> >
> > > is this new or what ?
> > Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....
> significantly refurbished from an older version, or refurbished mostly in meaning/intention for the occasion?

oh, sorry, forgot to say hello and all that, yada, yada, yada

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 by: Zod Zodly - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 20:47 UTC

On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 4:18:25 PM UTC-4, Rachel wrote:
> On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:17:55 PM UTC-7, Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
> > > Rachel wrote:
> > > > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>
> > > >> In Shadow
> > > >>
> > > >> In the Shadows
> > > >> They walked...
> > > >> in the shallows
> > > >> Where they could be safe.
> > > >>
> > > >> With a clover plane
> > > >> Beyond them
> > > >> With sharp knives
> > > >> They waited.
> > > >>
> > > >> I will be dead
> > > >> Drink to me
> > > >> I will not be
> > > >> Invited to the party.
> > > >>
> > > >> -- Zod
> > > >>
> > > >> *************
> > >
> > > > cool (but dark)
> > >
> > > > is this new or what ?
> > > Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....
> > significantly refurbished from an older version, or refurbished mostly in meaning/intention for the occasion?
> oh, sorry, forgot to say hello and all that, yada, yada, yada

I would say that it is quite significantly improved in revision...

And... GOOD DAY to you... Rachel....!!

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 by: Rachel - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 20:52 UTC

On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:47:58 PM UTC-7, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 4:18:25 PM UTC-4, Rachel wrote:
> > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:17:55 PM UTC-7, Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
> > > > Rachel wrote:
> > > > > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
> >
> > > > >> In Shadow
> > > > >>
> > > > >> In the Shadows
> > > > >> They walked...
> > > > >> in the shallows
> > > > >> Where they could be safe.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> With a clover plane
> > > > >> Beyond them
> > > > >> With sharp knives
> > > > >> They waited.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> I will be dead
> > > > >> Drink to me
> > > > >> I will not be
> > > > >> Invited to the party.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> -- Zod
> > > > >>
> > > > >> *************
> > > >
> > > > > cool (but dark)
> > > >
> > > > > is this new or what ?
> > > > Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....
> > > significantly refurbished from an older version, or refurbished mostly in meaning/intention for the occasion?
> > oh, sorry, forgot to say hello and all that, yada, yada, yada
> I would say that it is quite significantly improved in revision...
>
> And... GOOD DAY to you... Rachel....!!

revision, like with your mind's eye, or you changed letters or even words?

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 by: Rachel - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 20:56 UTC

On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:52:47 PM UTC-7, Rachel wrote:
> On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:47:58 PM UTC-7, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 4:18:25 PM UTC-4, Rachel wrote:
> > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:17:55 PM UTC-7, Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
> > > > > Rachel wrote:
> > > > > > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
> > >
> > > > > >> In Shadow
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> In the Shadows
> > > > > >> They walked...
> > > > > >> in the shallows
> > > > > >> Where they could be safe.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> With a clover plane
> > > > > >> Beyond them
> > > > > >> With sharp knives
> > > > > >> They waited.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> I will be dead
> > > > > >> Drink to me
> > > > > >> I will not be
> > > > > >> Invited to the party.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> -- Zod
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> *************
> > > > >
> > > > > > cool (but dark)
> > > > >
> > > > > > is this new or what ?
> > > > > Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....
> > > > significantly refurbished from an older version, or refurbished mostly in meaning/intention for the occasion?
> > > oh, sorry, forgot to say hello and all that, yada, yada, yada
> > I would say that it is quite significantly improved in revision...
> >
> > And... GOOD DAY to you... Rachel....!!
> revision, like with your mind's eye, or you changed letters or even words?

yada, yada, yada etc...

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 by: General-Zod - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 21:42 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:52:47 PM UTC-7, Rachel wrote:
>> On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 1:47:58 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>
>> > > > > >> In Shadow
>> > > > > >>
>> > > > > >> In the Shadows
>> > > > > >> They walked...
>> > > > > >> in the shallows
>> > > > > >> Where they could be safe.
>> > > > > >>
>> > > > > >> With a clover plane
>> > > > > >> Beyond them
>> > > > > >> With sharp knives
>> > > > > >> They waited.
>> > > > > >>
>> > > > > >> I will be dead
>> > > > > >> Drink to me
>> > > > > >> I will not be
>> > > > > >> Invited to the party.
>> > > > > >>
>> > > > > >> -- Zod
>> > > > > >>
>> > > > > >> *************
>> > > > >
>> > > > > > cool (but dark)
>> > > > >
>> > > > > > is this new or what ?
>> > > > > Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....
>> > > > significantly refurbished from an older version, or refurbished mostly in meaning/intention for the occasion?
>> > > oh, sorry, forgot to say hello and all that, yada, yada, yada
>> > I would say that it is quite significantly improved in revision...
>> >
>> > And... GOOD DAY to you... Rachel....!!
>> revision, like with your mind's eye, or you changed letters or even words?

> yada, yada, yada etc...

The poem has been well polished and made fresh for new readers....

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 by: W-Dockery - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 19:54 UTC

Rocky Stoneberg wrote:

> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

>> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> >
>>> > > In Shadow
>>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>>> > >
>>> > > In shadows
>>> > > they walked
>>> > > through the shallows
>>> > > where they could be safe.
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > Thank you
>>> >
>>> > >
>>> > > *************
>>> I thank you...
>> I we don't help one another, all is lost.

> You are correct....!

Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.

And so it goes.

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 by: General-Zod - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 21:35 UTC

Rachel wrote:
> Zod wrote:
>
>> > > > >> In Shadow
>> > > > >>
>> > > > >> In the Shadows
>> > > > >> They walked...
>> > > > >> in the shallows
>> > > > >> Where they could be safe.
>> > > > >>
>> > > > >> With a clover plane
>> > > > >> Beyond them
>> > > > >> With sharp knives
>> > > > >> They waited.
>> > > > >>
>> > > > >> I will be dead
>> > > > >> Drink to me
>> > > > >> I will not be
>> > > > >> Invited to the party.
>> > > > >>
>> > > > >> -- Zod
>> > > > >>
>> > > > >> *************
>> > > >
>> > > > > cool (but dark)
>> > > >
>> > > > > is this new or what ?
>> > > > Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....
>> > > significantly refurbished from an older version, or refurbished mostly in meaning/intention for the occasion?
>> > oh, sorry, forgot to say hello and all that, yada, yada, yada
>> I would say that it is quite significantly improved in revision...
>>
>> And... GOOD DAY to you... Rachel....!!

> revision, like with your mind's eye, or you changed letters or even words?

If you see any changes that need to be made, feel free to edit...!

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 by: Edward Rochester Esq - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 02:12 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 9:47:58 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
>
> > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>
> >> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> >>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> >>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >>> >
> >>> > > In Shadow
> >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
> >>> > >
> >>> > > In shadows
> >>> > > they walked
> >>> > > through the shallows
> >>> > > where they could be safe.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Thank you
> >>> >
> >>> > >
> >>> > > *************
> >>> I thank you...
> >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
>
> > You are correct....!
> Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.
>
> And so it goes.

Here's a clue for you and Zod, I can write circles around you low life's.

Once again, if we don't help one another, all is lost.

You're both here to destroy, I'm here to prevent that.

I won't respond further on this

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 by: Will Dockery - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 02:25 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:12:31 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 9:47:58 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
> >
> > > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> >
> > >> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> > >>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> > >>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > >>> >
> > >>> > > In Shadow
> > >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
> > >>> > >
> > >>> > > In shadows
> > >>> > > they walked
> > >>> > > through the shallows
> > >>> > > where they could be safe.
> > >>> >
> > >>> >
> > >>> > Thank you
> > >>> >
> > >>> > >
> > >>> > > *************
> > >>> I thank you...
> > >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
> >
> > > You are correct....!
> > Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.
> >
> > And so it goes.
> Here's a clue for you and Zod, I can write circles around you low life's.

So you say, but you still can't figure out how to use an apostrophe.

That's hilarious, Senetto.

HTH and HAND.

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 by: General-Zod - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 19:35 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:12:31 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 9:47:58 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> > Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
>> >
>> > > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>> >
>> > >> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > >>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>> > >>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> > >>> >
>> > >>> > > In Shadow
>> > >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>> > >>> > >
>> > >>> > > In shadows
>> > >>> > > they walked
>> > >>> > > through the shallows
>> > >>> > > where they could be safe.
>> > >>> >
>> > >>> >
>> > >>> > Thank you
>> > >>> >
>> > >>> > >
>> > >>> > > *************
>> > >>> I thank you...
>> > >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
>> >
>> > > You are correct....!
>> > Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.
>> >
>> > And so it goes.
>> Here's a clue for you and Zod, I can write circles around you low life's.

> So you say, but you still can't figure out how to use an apostrophe.

> That's hilarious, Senetto.

> HTH and HAND.

What a feeble minded doofus Jim Senetto remains... ha ha.

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Zod wrote:

> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

>> Zod wrote:
>>> blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>>> > Zod wrote:
>
>>> > > In Shadow
>>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>>> > >
>>> > > In shadows
>>> > > they walked
>>> > > through the shallows
>>> > > where they could be safe.
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > Thank you
>>> >
>>> > >
>>> > > *************
>>> I thank you...
>> I we don't help one another, all is lost.

> You are correct....!

<Group hug>

🙂

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 by: Zod - Tue, 25 Oct 2022 18:53 UTC

On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 3:52:58 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Zod wrote:
>
> > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> >> Zod wrote:
> >>> blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> >>> > Zod wrote:
> >
> >>> > > In Shadow
> >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
> >>> > >
> >>> > > In shadows
> >>> > > they walked
> >>> > > through the shallows
> >>> > > where they could be safe.
> >>> >
> >>> >
> >>> > Thank you
> >>> >
> >>> > >
> >>> > > *************
> >>> I thank you...
> >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
>
> > You are correct....!
> <Group hug>
>
> 🙂

Ha ha... very funny...

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 by: W-Dockery - Thu, 27 Oct 2022 20:33 UTC

General-Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

>>> Zod wrote:
>>>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>>>> > Zod wrote:
>
>>>> > > In Shadow
>>>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>>>> > >
>>>> > > In shadows
>>>> > > they walked
>>>> > > through the shallows
>>>> > > where they could be safe.
>>>> >
>>>> >
>>>> > Thank you
>>>> >
>>>> > >
>>>> > > *************
>>>> I thank you...
>>> I we don't help one another, all is lost.

>> Great, we agree for a change, Senetto.

> Coole....

Strange but apparently true.

;)

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 by: General-Zod - Mon, 31 Oct 2022 21:18 UTC

W-Dockery wrote:

> Zod wrote:

>> Michael Pendragon wrote:

>>> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>>
>>>> In Shadow
>>>>
>>>> In the Shadows
>>>> They walked...
>>>> in the shallows
>>>> Where they could be safe.

>>> QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?

>> https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows

>> ************

>> often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.

>> ************

> Well put.

Cool... cool... hi there...

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Zod wrote:

> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

>> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> >
>>> > > In Shadow
>>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>>> > >
>>> > > In shadows
>>> > > they walked
>>> > > through the shallows
>>> > > where they could be safe.
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > Thank you
>>> >
>>> > >
>>> > > *************
>>> I thank you...
>> I we don't help one another, all is lost.

> You are correct....!

Again, something we can all agree on.

:)

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 by: Will Dockery - Fri, 4 Nov 2022 21:21 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:12:31 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 9:47:58 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > Rocky Stoneberg wrote:
> >
> > > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> >
> > >> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> > >>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> > >>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > >>> >
> > >>> > > In Shadow
> > >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
> > >>> > >
> > >>> > > In shadows
> > >>> > > they walked
> > >>> > > through the shallows
> > >>> > > where they could be safe.
> > >>> >
> > >>> >
> > >>> > Thank you
> > >>> >
> > >>> > >
> > >>> > > *************
> > >>> I thank you...
> > >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
> >
> > > You are correct....!
> > Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.
> >
> > And so it goes.
> I can write circles around you low life's.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Yet, at 76 years old, you still can't learn how to use an apostrophe, Senetto. ^^^^^^

:)

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 by: Zod - Sat, 5 Nov 2022 20:43 UTC

On Friday, November 4, 2022 at 5:21:24 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> > Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > >> Zod wrote:
>
> > > >>> > > In Shadow
> > > >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
> > > >>> > >
> > > >>> > > In shadows
> > > >>> > > they walked
> > > >>> > > through the shallows
> > > >>> > > where they could be safe.
> > > >>> >
> > > >>> >
> > > >>> > Thank you
> > > >>> >
> > > >>> > >
> > > >>> > > *************
> > > >>> I thank you...
> > > >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
> > >
> > > > You are correct....!
> > > Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.
> > >
> > > And so it goes.
> > I can write circles around you low life's.
> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>
> Yet, at 76 years old, you still can't learn how to use an apostrophe, Senetto. ^^^^^^

Jim Senetto is a doofus.... sorry to say....

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 by: W-Dockery - Mon, 7 Nov 2022 21:20 UTC

Zod wrote:

> On Friday, November 4, 2022 at 5:21:24 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>> > > > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>> > > >> Zod wrote:
>>
>> > > >>> > > In Shadow
>> > > >>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>> > > >>> > >
>> > > >>> > > In shadows
>> > > >>> > > they walked
>> > > >>> > > through the shallows
>> > > >>> > > where they could be safe.
>> > > >>> >
>> > > >>> >
>> > > >>> > Thank you
>> > > >>> >
>> > > >>> > >
>> > > >>> > > *************
>> > > >>> I thank you...
>> > > >> I we don't help one another, all is lost.
>> > >
>> > > > You are correct....!
>> > > Good idea, and would be great if Senetto actually believed that.
>> > >
>> > > And so it goes.
>> > I can write circles around you low life's.
>> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>>
>> Yet, at 76 years old, you still can't learn how to use an apostrophe, Senetto. ^^^^^^

> Jim Senetto is a doofus.... sorry to say....

He's like Woody Harrelson's younger, dumber brother:

http://indiemusicpeople.com/uploads2/Jim_Senetto_-_Jim_III.jpg

;)

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