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by: Zod - Tue, 13 Sep 2022 20:24 UTC

In Shadow

In the Shadows
They walked...
in the shallows
Where they could be safe.

With a clover plane
Beyond them
With sharp knives
They waited.

I will be dead
Drink to me
I will not be
Invited to the party.

-- Zod

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by: Rachel - Wed, 14 Sep 2022 00:27 UTC

On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
> In Shadow
>
> In the Shadows
> They walked...
> in the shallows
> Where they could be safe.
>
> With a clover plane
> Beyond them
> With sharp knives
> They waited.
>
> I will be dead
> Drink to me
> I will not be
> Invited to the party.
>
> -- Zod
>
> *************

cool (but dark)

is this new or what ?

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by: Michael Pendragon - Wed, 14 Sep 2022 02:08 UTC

On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> In Shadow
>
> In the Shadows
> They walked...
> in the shallows
> Where they could be safe.

"They walked in the shadows..." is how anyone would actually say this line. Opening a poem with a hackneyed inversion pretty much seals its fate from the get-go.

BTW: You started line 3 with a lower case "i."

QUESTION: What are shadow shallow? Doe different shadows have different depths. Can one be knee-deep in shadows in one spot, then three steps later be up to his ears in them?

> With a clover plane
> Beyond them
> With sharp knives
> They waited.

(More) correctly: "They waited with sharp knives before a field of clover."

Your not-quite-sentence could be interpreted to mean that the clover plane was wielding knives. I never knew that clover leaves could slice.

> I will be dead
> Drink to me

With pleasure! When's the big day? (According to my calculations... sometime before May.)

> I will not be
> Invited to the party.

LOL! How did you know your death would be the cause for celebration?

But of course you'll be invited. We'll prop you up at the head of the table with a bottle of Ripple in your hand.
> -- Zod

On the positive side it beats the hell out of the Donkey's usual swill.

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by: W-Dockery - Fri, 16 Sep 2022 03:42 UTC

Zod wrote:
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> In Shadow

> In the Shadows
> They walked...
> in the shallows
> Where they could be safe.

> With a clover plane
> Beyond them
> With sharp knives
> They waited.

> I will be dead
> Drink to me
> I will not be
> Invited to the party.

> -- Zod

> *************

Good one, Zod.

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by: Victor H. - Sun, 18 Sep 2022 19:52 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

> is this new or what ?

I thank...

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by: Victor H. - Mon, 19 Sep 2022 21:14 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> cool (but dark)

> is this new or what ?

Zing zoinks hi there groovy girl....

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by: Victor H. - Thu, 22 Sep 2022 22:28 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> cool (but dark)

> is this new or what ?

Hi there Rachel, it is newly re written,.....

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by: Victor H. - Fri, 23 Sep 2022 21:18 UTC

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
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>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.

> QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?

https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows

************

often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.

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by: Michael Pendragon - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 00:00 UTC

On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 6:30:08 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>
> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >
> >> In Shadow
> >>
> >> In the Shadows
> >> They walked...
> >> in the shallows
> >> Where they could be safe.
> > QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?
> https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows
>
> ************
>
> often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.
>
> ************

Very good! You've found a definition for "shallows."

If you try real hard, you might find one for "shadows" as well.

If you do, please put the two definitions together and explain what "shadow shallows" are.

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by: Will Dockery - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 00:21 UTC

Not surprising that a city slicker monkey like Michael Pendragon wouldn't know what shallows are.

🙂

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by: Michael Pendragon - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 00:48 UTC

On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 8:21:24 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
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> > Michael Pendragon wrote:
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> > > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > >
> > >> In Shadow
> > >>
> > >> In the Shadows
> > >> They walked...
> > >> in the shallows
> > >> Where they could be safe.
> > > QUESTION: What are shadow shallow?
> > https://www.thefreedictionary.com/shallows
> >
> > ************
> >
> > often shallows A part of a body of water of little depth; a shoal: abandoned the boat in the shallows.
> >
> > ************
> Not surprising that a city slicker monkey like Michael Pendragon wouldn't know what shallows are.

My question isn't one of what shallows are (please try to pay attention, Donkey); I'm questioning how someone could walk in the shadows of shallow water. Not only have all of the shallows I've seen cast no shadow, but even if they had, the couple would have to be walking underwater (which would negate the concept of the shallows being shallow).

I think the General liked the fact that the words look and sound similar to one another, and decided to stick them into the same quasi-sentence without regard to meaning or... rationality.

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On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
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> In Shadow
>
> In the Shadows
> They walked...
> in the shallows
> Where they could be safe.
>
> With a clover plane
> Beyond them
> With sharp knives
> They waited.
>
> I will be dead
> Drink to me
> I will not be
> Invited to the party.
>
> -- Zod
>
> *************

Pendragon, they walked in the shadows, probably a wooded area, in a small creek, shallows, so they'd leave no footprints.

Get it now?

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by: Edward Rochester Esq - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 01:18 UTC

On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> In Shadow

My first stanza thoughts:
>
> In shadows
> they walked
> through the shallows
> where they could be safe.

Thank you

>
> *************

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by: W-Dockery - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 01:36 UTC

Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> In Shadow

> My first stanza thoughts:
>>
>> In shadows
>> they walked
>> through the shallows
>> where they could be safe.

> Thank you

>>
>> *************

Looks good, Senetto.

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Pendragon's playing stupid again.

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by: Michael Pendragon - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 02:03 UTC

On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:11:20 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >
> > In Shadow
> >
> > In the Shadows
> > They walked...
> > in the shallows
> > Where they could be safe.
> >
> > With a clover plane
> > Beyond them
> > With sharp knives
> > They waited.
> >
> > I will be dead
> > Drink to me
> > I will not be
> > Invited to the party.
> >
> > -- Zod
> >
> > *************
> Pendragon, they walked in the shadows, probably a wooded area, in a small creek, shallows, so they'd leave no footprints.
>
> Get it now?

That is not what the General wrote.

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by: Family Guy - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 02:41 UTC

On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:37:13 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>
> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >> In Shadow
>
> > My first stanza thoughts:
> >>
> >> In shadows
> >> they walked
> >> through the shallows
> >> where they could be safe.
>
>
> > Thank you
>
> >>
> >> *************
> Looks good, Senetto.

A stupid comment from Will Dockery?
At this time of the year, at this time of the day, in this part of the country, localized entirely in AAPC?

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by: Will Dockery - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 10:41 UTC

On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:41:38 PM UTC-4, Family Guy wrote:
> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 10:37:13 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> >
> > > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
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> >
> > > My first stanza thoughts:
> > >>
> > >> In shadows
> > >> they walked
> > >> through the shallows
> > >> where they could be safe.
> >
> >
> > > Thank you
> >
> > >>
> > >> *************
> > Looks good, Senetto.
> A stupid comment from Will Dockery?

A stupid troll post from Alex Cain?

> At this time of the year, at this time of the day, in this part of the country, localized entirely in AAPC?

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On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
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> > In Shadow
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> >
> > In shadows
> > they walked
> > through the shallows
> > where they could be safe.
>
>
> Thank you
>
> >
> > *************

I thank you...

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by: Edward Rochester Esq - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 21:34 UTC

On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >
> > > In Shadow
> > My first stanza thoughts:
> > >
> > > In shadows
> > > they walked
> > > through the shallows
> > > where they could be safe.
> >
> >
> > Thank you
> >
> > >
> > > *************
> I thank you...
I we don't help one another, all is lost.

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by: Victor Hugo Fan - Sat, 24 Sep 2022 21:37 UTC

On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:34:40 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > >
> > > > In Shadow
> > > My first stanza thoughts:
> > > >
> > > > In shadows
> > > > they walked
> > > > through the shallows
> > > > where they could be safe.
> > >
> > >
> > > Thank you
> > >
> > > >
> > > > *************
> > I thank you...
> I we don't help one another, all is lost.

Excellent... again I thank...

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by: W-Dockery - Tue, 27 Sep 2022 23:03 UTC

Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> >
>> > > In Shadow
>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>> > >
>> > > In shadows
>> > > they walked
>> > > through the shallows
>> > > where they could be safe.
>> >
>> >
>> > Thank you
>> >
>> > >
>> > > *************
>> I thank you...
> I we don't help one another, all is lost.

Great, we agree for a change, Senetto.

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by: General-Zod - Sat, 1 Oct 2022 17:01 UTC

W-Dockery wrote:

> Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

>> On Saturday, September 24, 2022 at 5:28:51 PM UTC-4, vhug...@gmail.com wrote:
>>> On Friday, September 23, 2022 at 9:18:46 PM UTC-4, blackpo...@aol.com wrote:
>>> > On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 8:08:43 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> >
>>> > > In Shadow
>>> > My first stanza thoughts:
>>> > >
>>> > > In shadows
>>> > > they walked
>>> > > through the shallows
>>> > > where they could be safe.
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > Thank you
>>> >
>>> > >
>>> > > *************
>>> I thank you...
>> I we don't help one another, all is lost.

> Great, we agree for a change, Senetto.

Coole....

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by: Rocky Stoneberg - Sun, 2 Oct 2022 19:29 UTC

Rachel wrote:

> On Tuesday, September 13, 2022 at 5:08:43 PM UTC-7, Zod wrote:
>> In Shadow
>>
>> In the Shadows
>> They walked...
>> in the shallows
>> Where they could be safe.
>>
>> With a clover plane
>> Beyond them
>> With sharp knives
>> They waited.
>>
>> I will be dead
>> Drink to me
>> I will not be
>> Invited to the party.
>>
>> -- Zod
>>
>> *************

> cool (but dark)

> is this new or what ?

Hi Rachel this poem was refurbished.....

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by: Rocky Stoneberg - Tue, 4 Oct 2022 20:45 UTC

Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:

You are correct....!

God help those who do not help themselves. -- Wilson Mizner

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