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by: General-Zod - Sat, 22 Oct 2022 21:40 UTC

Grey Matter Melody

Tomorrow receives
the roots
to these moments.

Your eyes
are closed now
to my soul.

Newspapers and radios
report
and they tell me
where your head is at.

I'm shooting
for between the eyes
fighting a dread
of a dismal future.

by Zod

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by: Coco DeSockmonkey - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 04:10 UTC

On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Grey Matter Melody
>
> Tomorrow receives
> the roots
> to these moments.
>
> Your eyes
> are closed now
> to my soul.
>
> Newspapers and radios
> report
> and they tell me
> where your head is at.
>
> I'm shooting
> for between the eyes
> fighting a dread
> of a dismal future.
>
> by Zod

How many times are you going to repost this tripe, General Stink?

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by: W-Dockery - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 04:34 UTC

General-Zod wrote:
>
> Grey Matter Melody

> Tomorrow receives
> the roots
> to these moments.

> Your eyes
> are closed now
> to my soul.

> Newspapers and radios
> report
> and they tell me
> where your head is at.

> I'm shooting
> for between the eyes
> fighting a dread
> of a dismal future.

> by Zod

Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.

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by: Ilya Shambat - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 07:52 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:
> >
> > Grey Matter Melody
>
> > Tomorrow receives
> > the roots
> > to these moments.
>
> > Your eyes
> > are closed now
> > to my soul.
>
> > Newspapers and radios
> > report
> > and they tell me
> > where your head is at.
>
> > I'm shooting
> > for between the eyes
> > fighting a dread
> > of a dismal future.
>
> > by Zod
> Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.

Yes.

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by: Michael Pendragon - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 16:27 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > General-Zod wrote:
> > >
> > > Grey Matter Melody
> >
> > > Tomorrow receives
> > > the roots
> > > to these moments.
> >
> > > Your eyes
> > > are closed now
> > > to my soul.
> >
> > > Newspapers and radios
> > > report
> > > and they tell me
> > > where your head is at.
> >
> > > I'm shooting
> > > for between the eyes
> > > fighting a dread
> > > of a dismal future.
> >
> > > by Zod
> > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> Yes.

Really, Ilya?

What do you get from Stink's gibberish?

Even an ESL reader should be able to see that lines like "Tomorrow receives the roots to these moments" are grammatically incorrect.

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by: W.Dockery - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 18:44 UTC

Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:

> On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> Grey Matter Melody
>>
>> Tomorrow receives
>> the roots
>> to these moments.
>>
>> Your eyes
>> are closed now
>> to my soul.
>>
>> Newspapers and radios
>> report
>> and they tell me
>> where your head is at.
>>
>> I'm shooting
>> for between the eyes
>> fighting a dread
>> of a dismal future.
>>
>> by Zod

> How many times are you

How many times are you going to whine, you shit spewing little monkey?

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 20:37 UTC

Ilya Shambat wrote:

> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:
>> >
>> > Grey Matter Melody
>>
>> > Tomorrow receives
>> > the roots
>> > to these moments.
>>
>> > Your eyes
>> > are closed now
>> > to my soul.
>>
>> > Newspapers and radios
>> > report
>> > and they tell me
>> > where your head is at.
>>
>> > I'm shooting
>> > for between the eyes
>> > fighting a dread
>> > of a dismal future.
>>
>> > by Zod
>> Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.

> Yes.

I thank you IS, and vote YES for more of your essays...!

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by: Zod - Sun, 23 Oct 2022 21:19 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:40:57 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> General-Zod wrote:
> >
> > Grey Matter Melody
>
> > Tomorrow receives
> > the roots
> > to these moments.
>
> > Your eyes
> > are closed now
> > to my soul.
>
> > Newspapers and radios
> > report
> > and they tell me
> > where your head is at.
>
> > I'm shooting
> > for between the eyes
> > fighting a dread
> > of a dismal future.
>
> > by Zod
> Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.

I thank you...!

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by: Michael Pendragon - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 03:47 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
>
> > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >> Grey Matter Melody
> >>
> >> Tomorrow receives
> >> the roots
> >> to these moments.
> >>
> >> Your eyes
> >> are closed now
> >> to my soul.
> >>
> >> Newspapers and radios
> >> report
> >> and they tell me
> >> where your head is at.
> >>
> >> I'm shooting
> >> for between the eyes
> >> fighting a dread
> >> of a dismal future.
> >>
> >> by Zod
>
> > How many times are you
> How many times are you going to whine, you shit spewing little monkey?

What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?

Grey Matter Melody

"Tomorrow receives
the roots
to these moments."

Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?

Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.

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by: Will Dockery - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 04:22 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:19:53 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:40:57 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> > General-Zod wrote:
> > >
> > > Grey Matter Melody
> >
> > > Tomorrow receives
> > > the roots
> > > to these moments.
> >
> > > Your eyes
> > > are closed now
> > > to my soul.
> >
> > > Newspapers and radios
> > > report
> > > and they tell me
> > > where your head is at.
> >
> > > I'm shooting
> > > for between the eyes
> > > fighting a dread
> > > of a dismal future.
> >
> > > by Zod
> > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> I thank you...!

Good morning, Zod, you're welcome.

🙂

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by: Zod - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 19:19 UTC

On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > >
> > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > >
> > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > the roots
> > > > to these moments.
> > >
> > > > Your eyes
> > > > are closed now
> > > > to my soul.
> > >
> > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > report
> > > > and they tell me
> > > > where your head is at.
> > >
> > > > I'm shooting
> > > > for between the eyes
> > > > fighting a dread
> > > > of a dismal future.
> > >
> > > > by Zod
> > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > Yes.
> Really, Ilya?

That's what the man said... now get over it...

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by: Michael Pendragon - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 20:00 UTC

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > >
> > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > the roots
> > > > > to these moments.
> > > >
> > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > are closed now
> > > > > to my soul.
> > > >
> > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > report
> > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > where your head is at.
> > > >
> > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > >
> > > > > by Zod
> > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > Yes.
> > Really, Ilya?
> That's what the man said... now get over it...

I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it, Stink.

Is there some reason why you don't want him to explain?

Michael Pendragon
"A favorite movie.... I read it like a comic book....."
-- George "Stink" Sulzbach, career pissbum

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by: Family Guy - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 20:09 UTC

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > >
> > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > >
> > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > >
> > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > report
> > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > >
> > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > >
> > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > Yes.
> > > Really, Ilya?
> > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it, Stink.
>
> Is there some reason why you don't want him to explain?
>
The fact that they're all idiotic trolls might have something to do with it.

>
> Michael Pendragon
> "A favorite movie.... I read it like a comic book....."
> -- George "Stink" Sulzbach, career pissbum

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by: General-Zod - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 21:08 UTC

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
>> > > > General-Zod wrote:
>> > > > >
>> > > > > Grey Matter Melody
>> > > >
>> > > > > Tomorrow receives
>> > > > > the roots
>> > > > > to these moments.
>> > > >
>> > > > > Your eyes
>> > > > > are closed now
>> > > > > to my soul.
>> > > >
>> > > > > Newspapers and radios
>> > > > > report
>> > > > > and they tell me
>> > > > > where your head is at.
>> > > >
>> > > > > I'm shooting
>> > > > > for between the eyes
>> > > > > fighting a dread
>> > > > > of a dismal future.
>> > > >
>> > > > > by Zod
>> > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
>> > > Yes.
>> > Really, Ilya?
>> That's what the man said... now get over it...

> I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it

I.S. obviously knows good poetry when he reads it...!

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by: Will Dockery - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 21:32 UTC

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>
> > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > >
> > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > >
> > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > >
> > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > report
> > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > >
> > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > >
> > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > Yes.
> > > Really, Ilya?
> > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it

"A poem should not mean
But be." -Archibald MacLeish

HTH and HAND.

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by: Michael Pendragon - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 21:52 UTC

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 5:32:57 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >
> > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > report
> > > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > > Yes.
> > > > Really, Ilya?
> > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
> "A poem should not mean
> But be." -Archibald MacLeish

I didn't ask Ilya what it meant, Donkey.

I asked him what he got out of Stink's gibberish.

Here's my original post:

"What do you get from Stink's gibberish? Even an ESL reader should be able to see that lines like 'Tomorrow receives the roots to these moments' are grammatically incorrect."

And, since you haven't answered the questions I'd asked you, I'll put them to you again:

What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?

Grey Matter Melody

"Tomorrow receives
the roots
to these moments."

Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?

Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.

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by: Will Dockery - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 22:05 UTC

You know Pendragon, always trolling

🙂

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by: General-Zod - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 22:16 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>
>> > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
>> > > > >
>> > > > > > Tomorrow receives
>> > > > > > the roots
>> > > > > > to these moments.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > > Your eyes
>> > > > > > are closed now
>> > > > > > to my soul.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > > Newspapers and radios
>> > > > > > report
>> > > > > > and they tell me
>> > > > > > where your head is at.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > > I'm shooting
>> > > > > > for between the eyes
>> > > > > > fighting a dread
>> > > > > > of a dismal future.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > > by Zod
>> > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
>> > > > Yes.
>> > > Really, Ilya?
>> > That's what the man said... now get over it...
>> I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it

> "A poem should not mean
> But be." -Archibald MacLeish

> HTH and HAND.

Good one, Doc..!

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by: Michael Pendragon - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 23:35 UTC

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 6:05:30 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > >
> > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > >
> > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > >
> > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > report
> > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > >
> > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > >
> > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > Yes.
> > > Really, Ilya?
> > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> You know Pendragon, always trolling

How is asking questions about poetry in a poetry discussion group "trolling," Donkey?

I'd like to discuss Stink's poem with you.

What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?

Grey Matter Melody

"Tomorrow receives
the roots
to these moments."

Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?

Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.

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by: Edward Rochester Esq - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 23:39 UTC

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 7:35:23 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 6:05:30 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > report
> > > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > > Yes.
> > > > Really, Ilya?
> > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> > You know Pendragon, always trolling
> How is asking questions about poetry in a poetry discussion group "trolling," Donkey?
>
> I'd like to discuss Stink's poem with you.
> What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?
> Grey Matter Melody
>
> "Tomorrow receives
> the roots
> to these moments."
> Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
>
> And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?
>
> Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
>
> Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.

I'd like to give it a shot, Michael.

I believe it's a 'Hair Club for Men' commercial.

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by: Rachel - Mon, 24 Oct 2022 23:40 UTC

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:35:23 PM UTC-7, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 6:05:30 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > report
> > > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > > Yes.
> > > > Really, Ilya?
> > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> > You know Pendragon, always trolling
> How is asking questions about poetry in a poetry discussion group "trolling," Donkey?
>
> I'd like to discuss Stink's poem with you.
> What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?
> Grey Matter Melody
>
> "Tomorrow receives
> the roots
> to these moments."
> Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
>
> And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?
>
> Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
>
> Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.

he could rearrange them

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> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 6:05:30 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > > report
> > > > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > > > Yes.
> > > > > Really, Ilya?
> > > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> > > You know Pendragon, always trolling
> > How is asking questions about poetry in a poetry discussion group "trolling," Donkey?
> >
> > I'd like to discuss Stink's poem with you.
> > What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?
> > Grey Matter Melody
> >
> > "Tomorrow receives
> > the roots
> > to these moments."
> > Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
> >
> > And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?
> >
> > Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
> >
> > Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.
> I'd like to give it a shot, Michael.
>
> I believe it's a 'Hair Club for Men' commercial.

maybe it's a distal future

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by: W.Dockery - Tue, 25 Oct 2022 01:20 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>>> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>>
>>> > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
>>> > > > >
>>> > > > > > Tomorrow receives
>>> > > > > > the roots
>>> > > > > > to these moments.
>>> > > > >
>>> > > > > > Your eyes
>>> > > > > > are closed now
>>> > > > > > to my soul.
>>> > > > >
>>> > > > > > Newspapers and radios
>>> > > > > > report
>>> > > > > > and they tell me
>>> > > > > > where your head is at.
>>> > > > >
>>> > > > > > I'm shooting
>>> > > > > > for between the eyes
>>> > > > > > fighting a dread
>>> > > > > > of a dismal future.
>>> > > > >
>>> > > > > > by Zod
>>> > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
>>> > > > Yes.
>>> > > Really, Ilya?
>>> > That's what the man said... now get over it...
>>> I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it

>> "A poem should not mean
>> But be." -Archibald MacLeish

>> HTH and HAND.

> Good one, Doc..!

Apparently it went over Pendragon's head.

🙂

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by: Will Dockery - Tue, 25 Oct 2022 01:34 UTC

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 9:32:03 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> > > > General-Zod wrote:
> >> > > > >
> >> > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > Tomorrow receives
> >> > > > > the roots
> >> > > > > to these moments.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > Your eyes
> >> > > > > are closed now
> >> > > > > to my soul.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > Newspapers and radios
> >> > > > > report
> >> > > > > and they tell me
> >> > > > > where your head is at.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > I'm shooting
> >> > > > > for between the eyes
> >> > > > > fighting a dread
> >> > > > > of a dismal future.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > by Zod
> >> > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> >> > > Yes.
> >> > Really, Ilya?
> >> That's what the man said... now get over it...
>
> > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
> I.S. obviously knows good poetry when he reads it...!

Exactly.

🙂

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by: W.Dockery - Tue, 25 Oct 2022 07:49 UTC

Zod wrote:

> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:40:57 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> General-Zod wrote:
>> >
>> > Grey Matter Melody
>>
>> > Tomorrow receives
>> > the roots
>> > to these moments.
>>
>> > Your eyes
>> > are closed now
>> > to my soul.
>>
>> > Newspapers and radios
>> > report
>> > and they tell me
>> > where your head is at.
>>
>> > I'm shooting
>> > for between the eyes
>> > fighting a dread
>> > of a dismal future.
>>
>> > by Zod
>> Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.

> I thank you...!

Good morning, my friend, you're welcome.

🙂

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