On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 4:21:43 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:
>
> > Will Dockery wrote:
>
> >> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> >>> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >>>
> >>> > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> >>> > > > >
> >>> > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> >>> > > > > > the roots
> >>> > > > > > to these moments.
> >>> > > > >
> >>> > > > > > Your eyes
> >>> > > > > > are closed now
> >>> > > > > > to my soul.
> >>> > > > >
> >>> > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> >>> > > > > > report
> >>> > > > > > and they tell me
> >>> > > > > > where your head is at.
> >>> > > > >
> >>> > > > > > I'm shooting
> >>> > > > > > for between the eyes
> >>> > > > > > fighting a dread
> >>> > > > > > of a dismal future.
> >>> > > > >
> >>> > > > > > by Zod
> >>> > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> >>> > > > Yes.
> >>> > > Really, Ilya?
> >>> > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> >>> I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
>
> >> "A poem should not mean
> >> But be." -Archibald MacLeish
>
> >> HTH and HAND.
>
> > Good one, Doc..!
> Apparently it went over Pendragon's head.

No, Donkey.

I realize that you're attempting to use it as a cop-out, but it simply doesn't apply to my questions.

What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?

Grey Matter Melody

"Tomorrow receives
the roots
to these moments."

Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?

Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 4:21:43 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:
>>
>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> >> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> >>> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> >>>
>> >>> > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
>> >>> > > > >
>> >>> > > > > > Tomorrow receives
>> >>> > > > > > the roots
>> >>> > > > > > to these moments.
>> >>> > > > >
>> >>> > > > > > Your eyes
>> >>> > > > > > are closed now
>> >>> > > > > > to my soul.
>> >>> > > > >
>> >>> > > > > > Newspapers and radios
>> >>> > > > > > report
>> >>> > > > > > and they tell me
>> >>> > > > > > where your head is at.
>> >>> > > > >
>> >>> > > > > > I'm shooting
>> >>> > > > > > for between the eyes
>> >>> > > > > > fighting a dread
>> >>> > > > > > of a dismal future.
>> >>> > > > >
>> >>> > > > > > by Zod
>> >>> > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
>> >>> > > > Yes.
>> >>> > > Really, Ilya?
>> >>> > That's what the man said... now get over it...
>> >>> I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
>>
>> >> "A poem should not mean
>> >> But be." -Archibald MacLeish
>>
>> >> HTH and HAND.
>>
>> > Good one, Doc..!
>> Apparently it went over Pendragon's head.

> No

Again, I didn't expect you to admit it, Pendragon, you sleazy shit spewing little monkey

HTH and HAND.

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 7:40:13 PM UTC-4, Rachel wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:35:23 PM UTC-7, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 6:05:30 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > > report
> > > > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > > > Yes.
> > > > > Really, Ilya?
> > > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> > > You know Pendragon, always trolling
>
> > Grey Matter Melody
> >
> > "Tomorrow receives
> > the roots
> > to these moments."
>
> he could rearrange them

If you have any ideas would love to hear them....

On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 3:08:10 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 7:40:13 PM UTC-4, Rachel wrote:
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:35:23 PM UTC-7, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 6:05:30 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > > > report
> > > > > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > > > > Yes.
> > > > > > Really, Ilya?
> > > > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> > > > You know Pendragon, always trolling
> >
> > > Grey Matter Melody
> > >
> > > "Tomorrow receives
> > > the roots
> > > to these moments."
> >
> > he could rearrange them
>
> If you have any ideas would love to hear them....

So, Stink, is your misuse of "to" intentional, or are you just functionally illiterate?

Zod wrote:

> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 7:40:13 PM UTC-4, Rachel wrote:
>> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:35:23 PM UTC-7, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 6:05:30 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> > > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
>> > > > > > > General-Zod wrote:
>> > > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
>> > > > > > > > the roots
>> > > > > > > > to these moments.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > Your eyes
>> > > > > > > > are closed now
>> > > > > > > > to my soul.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
>> > > > > > > > report
>> > > > > > > > and they tell me
>> > > > > > > > where your head is at.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > I'm shooting
>> > > > > > > > for between the eyes
>> > > > > > > > fighting a dread
>> > > > > > > > of a dismal future.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > by Zod
>> > > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
>> > > > > > Yes.
>> > > > > Really, Ilya?
>> > > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
>> > > You know Pendragon, always trolling
>>
>> > Grey Matter Melody
>> >
>> > "Tomorrow receives
>> > the roots
>> > to these moments."
>>
>> he could rearrange them

> If you have any ideas would love to hear them....

Obviously the poem is abstract expressionism.

Michael Pendragon wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 5:32:57 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >
> > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > report
> > > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > > Yes.
> > > > Really, Ilya?
> > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it

Like I said:

"A poem should not mean
But be." -Archibald MacLeish

HTH and HAND.

🙂

On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 9:24:09 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 5:32:57 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > >
> > > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > > the roots
> > > > > > > > to these moments.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Your eyes
> > > > > > > > are closed now
> > > > > > > > to my soul.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > > report
> > > > > > > > and they tell me
> > > > > > > > where your head is at.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > I'm shooting
> > > > > > > > for between the eyes
> > > > > > > > fighting a dread
> > > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > by Zod
> > > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > > > > > Yes.
> > > > > Really, Ilya?
> > > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> > > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
> Like I said:
>
> "A poem should not mean
> But be." -Archibald MacLeish

You obviously don't understand MacLeish if you think his statement even begins to address my question.

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 9:24:09 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 5:32:57 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> >> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> >> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> > >
>> > > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
>> > > > > > > > the roots
>> > > > > > > > to these moments.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > Your eyes
>> > > > > > > > are closed now
>> > > > > > > > to my soul.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
>> > > > > > > > report
>> > > > > > > > and they tell me
>> > > > > > > > where your head is at.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > I'm shooting
>> > > > > > > > for between the eyes
>> > > > > > > > fighting a dread
>> > > > > > > > of a dismal future.
>> > > > > > >
>> > > > > > > > by Zod
>> > > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
>> > > > > > Yes.
>> > > > > Really, Ilya?
>> > > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
>> > > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
>> Like I said:
>>
>> "A poem should not mean
>> But be." -Archibald MacLeish

> You obviously don't understand MacLeish

Let me guess, have you deluded yourself into thinking youoa better poet than him, also?

🙂

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 9:32:03 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> > > > General-Zod wrote:
> >> > > > >
> >> > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > Tomorrow receives
> >> > > > > the roots
> >> > > > > to these moments.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > Your eyes
> >> > > > > are closed now
> >> > > > > to my soul.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > Newspapers and radios
> >> > > > > report
> >> > > > > and they tell me
> >> > > > > where your head is at.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > I'm shooting
> >> > > > > for between the eyes
> >> > > > > fighting a dread
> >> > > > > of a dismal future.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > by Zod
> >> > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> >> > > Yes.
> >> > Really, Ilya?
> >> That's what the man said... now get over it...
>
> > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
> I.S. obviously knows good poetry when he reads it...!

While your poem obviously went over Pendragon's head.

🙂

On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 10:28:31 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 9:32:03 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > Michael Pendragon wrote:
> >
> > > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > >> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 12:27:45 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > >> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 3:52:43 AM UTC-4, ibsh...@gmail.com wrote:
> > >> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 5:40:57 PM UTC+10, Will Dockery wrote:
> > >> > > > General-Zod wrote:
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > > Tomorrow receives
> > >> > > > > the roots
> > >> > > > > to these moments.
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > > Your eyes
> > >> > > > > are closed now
> > >> > > > > to my soul.
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > > Newspapers and radios
> > >> > > > > report
> > >> > > > > and they tell me
> > >> > > > > where your head is at.
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > > I'm shooting
> > >> > > > > for between the eyes
> > >> > > > > fighting a dread
> > >> > > > > of a dismal future.
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > > by Zod
> > >> > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> > >> > > Yes.
> > >> > Really, Ilya?
> > >> That's what the man said... now get over it...
> >
> > > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
> > I.S. obviously knows good poetry when he reads it...!
> While your poem obviously went over Pendragon's head.

Your statement implies that it did not go over yours, Donkey.

And since it did not go over your head, I'll ask you again:

What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?

Grey Matter Melody

"Tomorrow receives
the roots
to these moments."

Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?

Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.

On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>
>> Grey Matter Melody
>
> Tomorrow receives
> the roots
> to these moments.

He's obviously talking about time and the future's ties with the past and present.

> Your eyes
> are closed now
> to my soul.
>
> Newspapers and radios
> report
> and they tell me
> where your head is at.
>
> I'm shooting
> for between the eyes
> fighting a dread
> of a dismal future.
>
> by Zod

....

On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 11:48:39 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >
> >> Grey Matter Melody
> >
> > Tomorrow receives
> > the roots
> > to these moments.
> He's obviously talking about time and the future's ties with the past and present.

I didn't ask you that, Donkey.

My questions were very specific:

Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?

Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 11:48:39 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> >
>> >> Grey Matter Melody
>> >
>> > Tomorrow receives
>> > the roots
>> > to these moments.
>> He's obviously talking about time and the future's ties with the past and present.

> I didn't ask you that

Well whine on, because that's my answer, you shit slinging little monkey.

🙂

On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 3:47:40 AM UTC-7, Will Dockery wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>
> > On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 9:24:09 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> >> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 5:32:57 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> >> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> >> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >> > >
> >> > > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> >> > > > > > >
> >> > > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> >> > > > > > > > the roots
> >> > > > > > > > to these moments.
> >> > > > > > >
> >> > > > > > > > Your eyes
> >> > > > > > > > are closed now
> >> > > > > > > > to my soul.
> >> > > > > > >
> >> > > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> >> > > > > > > > report
> >> > > > > > > > and they tell me
> >> > > > > > > > where your head is at.
> >> > > > > > >
> >> > > > > > > > I'm shooting
> >> > > > > > > > for between the eyes
> >> > > > > > > > fighting a dread
> >> > > > > > > > of a dismal future.
> >> > > > > > >
> >> > > > > > > > by Zod
> >> > > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> >> > > > > > Yes.
> >> > > > > Really, Ilya?
> >> > > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> >> > > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
> >> Like I said:
> >>
> >> "A poem should not mean
> >> But be." -Archibald MacLeish
>
> > You obviously don't understand MacLeish
> Let me guess, have you deluded yourself into thinking youoa better poet than him, also?
>
> 🙂

if he has, how would he know

Rachel wrote:

> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 3:47:40 AM UTC-7, Will Dockery wrote:
>> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>>
>> > On Tuesday, October 25, 2022 at 9:24:09 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> >> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 5:32:57 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> >> >> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> >> >> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> >> > >
>> >> > > > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
>> >> > > > > > >
>> >> > > > > > > > Tomorrow receives
>> >> > > > > > > > the roots
>> >> > > > > > > > to these moments.
>> >> > > > > > >
>> >> > > > > > > > Your eyes
>> >> > > > > > > > are closed now
>> >> > > > > > > > to my soul.
>> >> > > > > > >
>> >> > > > > > > > Newspapers and radios
>> >> > > > > > > > report
>> >> > > > > > > > and they tell me
>> >> > > > > > > > where your head is at.
>> >> > > > > > >
>> >> > > > > > > > I'm shooting
>> >> > > > > > > > for between the eyes
>> >> > > > > > > > fighting a dread
>> >> > > > > > > > of a dismal future.
>> >> > > > > > >
>> >> > > > > > > > by Zod
>> >> > > > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
>> >> > > > > > Yes.
>> >> > > > > Really, Ilya?
>> >> > > > That's what the man said... now get over it...
>> >> > > I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
>> >> Like I said:
>> >>
>> >> "A poem should not mean
>> >> But be." -Archibald MacLeish
>>
>> > You obviously don't understand MacLeish
>> Let me guess, have you deluded yourself into thinking youoa better poet than him, also?
>>
>

> if he has, how would he know

Good point.

On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 8:52:15 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 4:00:46 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> >> On Monday, October 24, 2022 at 3:19:49 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> >>
> >> > > > > > Grey Matter Melody
> >> > > > >
> >> > > > > > Tomorrow receives
> >> > > > > > the roots
> >> > > > > > to these moments.
> >> > > > >
> >> > > > > > Your eyes
> >> > > > > > are closed now
> >> > > > > > to my soul.
> >> > > > >
> >> > > > > > Newspapers and radios
> >> > > > > > report
> >> > > > > > and they tell me
> >> > > > > > where your head is at.
> >> > > > >
> >> > > > > > I'm shooting
> >> > > > > > for between the eyes
> >> > > > > > fighting a dread
> >> > > > > > of a dismal future.
> >> > > > >
> >> > > > > > by Zod
> >> > > > > Good one, Zod, keep up the good work.
> >> > > > Yes.
> >> > > Really, Ilya?
> >> > That's what the man said... now get over it...
> >> I'm asking Ilya what he found good in it
>
> > "A poem should not mean
> > But be." -Archibald MacLeish
>
> > HTH and HAND.
> Good one, Doc..!

It's good advice to those who want to try to over think poetry.

On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > >
> > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > >> Grey Matter Melody
> > > >>
> > > >> Tomorrow receives
> > > >> the roots
> > > >> to these moments.
> > > >>
> > > >> Your eyes
> > > >> are closed now
> > > >> to my soul.
> > > >>
> > > >> Newspapers and radios
> > > >> report
> > > >> and they tell me
> > > >> where your head is at.
> > > >>
> > > >> I'm shooting
> > > >> for between the eyes
> > > >> fighting a dread
> > > >> of a dismal future.
> > > >>
> > > >> by Zod
> > >
> > > > How many times are you
> > > How many times are you going to whine, you shit spewing little monkey?
> > What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?
> > Grey Matter Melody
> >
> > "Tomorrow receives
> > the roots
> > to these moments."
> > Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
> >
> > And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?
> >
> > Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
> >
> > Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.
> As I've stated before, I don't discuss friends and family here. Since I consider Zod a friend, I won't be discussing his poem.

So you refuse to discuss your friend's poem in a poetry discussion group?

Why else is your friend posting here?

Why else are you here?

I've asked you two legitimate questions about your friend's poem. Please be so good as to respond to them.

Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?

Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?

On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:24:23 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, FAKE Will Dockery FORGERY xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > >> Grey Matter Melody
> > > > >>
> > > > >> Tomorrow receives
> > > > >> the roots
> > > > >> to these moments.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> Your eyes
> > > > >> are closed now
> > > > >> to my soul.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> Newspapers and radios
> > > > >> report
> > > > >> and they tell me
> > > > >> where your head is at.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> I'm shooting
> > > > >> for between the eyes
> > > > >> fighting a dread
> > > > >> of a dismal future.
> > > > >>
> > > > >> by Zod

xxxxxxxxxx trolling snipped xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

> > As I've stated beforexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>
> So you refuse to discuss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxs

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Looks like you were fooled by another FORGERY of Doc, Pen....!

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, fake Dockery forged:
>> On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
>> > >
>> > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> > > >> Grey Matter Melody
>> > > >>
>> > > >> Tomorrow receives
>> > > >> the roots
>> > > >> to these moments.
>> > > >>
>> > > >> Your eyes
>> > > >> are closed now
>> > > >> to my soul.
>> > > >>
>> > > >> Newspapers and radios
>> > > >> report
>> > > >> and they tell me
>> > > >> where your head is at.
>> > > >>
>> > > >> I'm shooting
>> > > >> for between the eyes
>> > > >> fighting a dread
>> > > >> of a dismal future.
>> > > >>
>> > > >> by Zod
>> > >
>> > > > How many times are you
>> > > How many times are you going to whine, you shit spewing little monkey?
>> > What do you make of the first stanza, Donkey?
>> > Grey Matter Melody
>> >
>> > "Tomorrow receives
>> > the roots
>> > to these moments."
>> > Is Stink's misuse of "to" intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
>> >
>> > And why does he designate the moments as "these," which entails that they have been previously mentioned?
>> >
>> > Is that also intentional, or is he just functionally illiterate?
>> >
>> > Stink's poetry is generally an exercise in incompetence -- but I wouldn't expect you to be aware of that.
>> As I've stated before, I don't discuss friends and family here. Since I consider Zod a friend, I won't be discussing his poem.

> So you refuse

That was a forgery, Pendragon... see how even you are fooled by these identioty thefts?

HTH and HAND.

On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:29:17 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:24:23 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, FAKE Will Dockery FORGERY xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > >
> > > > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > > >> Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> Tomorrow receives
> > > > > >> the roots
> > > > > >> to these moments.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> Your eyes
> > > > > >> are closed now
> > > > > >> to my soul.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> Newspapers and radios
> > > > > >> report
> > > > > >> and they tell me
> > > > > >> where your head is at.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> I'm shooting
> > > > > >> for between the eyes
> > > > > >> fighting a dread
> > > > > >> of a dismal future.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> by Zod
> xxxxxxxxxx trolling snipped xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>
> > > As I've stated beforexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> >
> > So you refuse to discuss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxs
>
> xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>
> Looks like you were fooled by another FORGERY of Doc, Pen....!

Yes, that's an impostor troll.

HTH and HAND.

On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:54:00 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:29:17 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:24:23 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, FAKE Will Dockery FORGERY xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > > > >> Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > >> the roots
> > > > > > >> to these moments.
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> Your eyes
> > > > > > >> are closed now
> > > > > > >> to my soul.
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > >> report
> > > > > > >> and they tell me
> > > > > > >> where your head is at.
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> I'm shooting
> > > > > > >> for between the eyes
> > > > > > >> fighting a dread
> > > > > > >> of a dismal future.
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> by Zod
> > xxxxxxxxxx trolling snipped xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> >
> > > > As I've stated beforexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > >
> > > So you refuse to discuss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxs
> >
> > xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> >
> > Looks like you were fooled by another FORGERY of Doc, Pen....!
> Yes, that's an impostor troll.
>
> HTH and HAND.

Really?

I don't see the "real" Will Donkey answering either of my questions.

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:54:00 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:29:17 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:24:23 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, FAKE Will Dockery FORGERY xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
>> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> > > > > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
>> > > > > >
>> > > > > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> > > > > > >> Grey Matter Melody
>> > > > > > >>
>> > > > > > >> Tomorrow receives
>> > > > > > >> the roots
>> > > > > > >> to these moments.
>> > > > > > >>
>> > > > > > >> Your eyes
>> > > > > > >> are closed now
>> > > > > > >> to my soul.
>> > > > > > >>
>> > > > > > >> Newspapers and radios
>> > > > > > >> report
>> > > > > > >> and they tell me
>> > > > > > >> where your head is at.
>> > > > > > >>
>> > > > > > >> I'm shooting
>> > > > > > >> for between the eyes
>> > > > > > >> fighting a dread
>> > > > > > >> of a dismal future.
>> > > > > > >>
>> > > > > > >> by Zod
>> > xxxxxxxxxx trolling snipped xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>> >
>> > > > As I've stated beforexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>> > >
>> > > So you refuse to discuss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxs
>> >
>> > xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>> >
>> > Looks like you were fooled by another FORGERY of Doc, Pen....!
>> Yes, that's an impostor troll.
>>
>> HTH and HAND.

> Really?

Yep, really.....!

On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:54:00 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:29:17 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:24:23 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, FAKE Will Dockery FORGERY xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > > > >> Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > >> the roots
> > > > > > >> to these moments.
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> Your eyes
> > > > > > >> are closed now
> > > > > > >> to my soul.
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > >> report
> > > > > > >> and they tell me
> > > > > > >> where your head is at.
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> I'm shooting
> > > > > > >> for between the eyes
> > > > > > >> fighting a dread
> > > > > > >> of a dismal future.
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> by Zod
> > xxxxxxxxxx trolling snipped xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> >
> > > > As I've stated beforexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > >
> > > So you refuse to discuss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxs
> >
> > xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> >
> > Looks like you were fooled by another FORGERY of Doc, Pen....!
> Yes, that's an impostor troll.
>
> HTH and HAND.

Pen seems to be fooled so often by these trolls... odd...

On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 5:24:33 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:54:00 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:29:17 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:24:23 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, FAKE Will Dockery FORGERY xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > > > > >> Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > >> the roots
> > > > > > > >> to these moments.
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> Your eyes
> > > > > > > >> are closed now
> > > > > > > >> to my soul.
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > >> report
> > > > > > > >> and they tell me
> > > > > > > >> where your head is at.
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> I'm shooting
> > > > > > > >> for between the eyes
> > > > > > > >> fighting a dread
> > > > > > > >> of a dismal future.
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> by Zod
> > > xxxxxxxxxx trolling snipped xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > >
> > > > > As I've stated beforexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > >
> > > > So you refuse to discuss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxs
> > >
> > > xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > >
> > > Looks like you were fooled by another FORGERY of Doc, Pen....!
> > Yes, that's an impostor troll.
> >
> > HTH and HAND.
> Pen seems to be fooled so often by these trolls... odd...

The imposter appears to have spoken on the Donkey's behalf.

I can't think of any other reason (even in Donkey terms) that would account for his refusal to answer my questions regarding your poem.

On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 5:24:33 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:54:00 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:29:17 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 4:24:23 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > On Wednesday, October 26, 2022 at 2:08:26 PM UTC-4, FAKE Will Dockery FORGERY xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 11:47:49 PM UTC-4, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > > > > On Sunday, October 23, 2022 at 10:41:16 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > > > > Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:
> > > > > > >
> > > > > > > > On Saturday, October 22, 2022 at 10:59:26 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
> > > > > > > >> Grey Matter Melody
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> Tomorrow receives
> > > > > > > >> the roots
> > > > > > > >> to these moments.
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> Your eyes
> > > > > > > >> are closed now
> > > > > > > >> to my soul.
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> Newspapers and radios
> > > > > > > >> report
> > > > > > > >> and they tell me
> > > > > > > >> where your head is at.
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> I'm shooting
> > > > > > > >> for between the eyes
> > > > > > > >> fighting a dread
> > > > > > > >> of a dismal future.
> > > > > > > >>
> > > > > > > >> by Zod
> > > xxxxxxxxxx trolling snipped xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > >
> > > > > As I've stated beforexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > > >
> > > > So you refuse to discuss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxs
> > >
> > > xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > >
> > > Looks like you were fooled by another FORGERY of Doc, Pen....!
> > Yes, that's an impostor troll.
> >
> > HTH and HAND.
> Pen seems to be fooled so often by these trolls... odd...

Odd, isn't it?

🙂