Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html

Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.

Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.

Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
“INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “

We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.

On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 13:47:45 -0800 (PST), NancyGene
<nancygene.andjayme@gmail.com> wrote:

>Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
>https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
>
>Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
>
>Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
>
>Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
>“INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
>
>We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.

You are one silly ass.

All those quotes were referenced. See the reference and check the
bibliography.

You really don't know much, do you?

You are a dishonest and deceitful worm.

Saved for my attorney. RE: False accusations of plagiarism.

On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 13:47:45 -0800 (PST), NancyGene
<nancygene.andjayme@gmail.com> wrote:

>Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
>https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
>
>Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
>
>Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
>
>Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
>“INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
>
>We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 5:47:45 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
> On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 13:47:45 -0800 (PST), NancyGene
> <nancygene...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> >Class, we know that you recall our

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

> You are one silly ass.
>
> All those quotes were referenced. See the reference and check the
> bibliography.
>
> You really don't know much, do you?
>
> You are a dishonest and deceitful worm.

Nancy G. is one of those "know it all"s who... don't.

Ha ha.

On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 13:47:45 -0800 (PST), NancyGene
<nancygene.andjayme@gmail.com> wrote:

>Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
>https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html

Class, also note that a blithering idiot is making claims of which it
knows NOTHING about. The phrase "DUMB BROAD" comes to mind.

>Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
>
>Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which,
******************
> he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.

There is the reference, you blithering idiot! Now, look in the
bibliogarphy. My god, you are stupid.

On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 14:50:42 -0800 (PST), Zod <vhugofan@gmail.com>
wrote:

>On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 5:47:45 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
>> On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 13:47:45 -0800 (PST), NancyGene
>> <nancygene...@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> >Class, we know that you recall our
>
>
>xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
>
>
>> You are one silly ass.
>>
>> All those quotes were referenced. See the reference and check the
>> bibliography.
>>
>> You really don't know much, do you?
>>
>> You are a dishonest and deceitful worm.
>
>Nancy G. is one of those "know it all"s who... don't.
>
>Ha ha.

She has absolutely no idea of the format of a dissertation.

The doctoral dissertation presents "NEW" and "ORIGINAL" research into
a given topic.

In order to do that,a "Rationale" is needed along with a "Review of
the Literature" (previous research) into the topic at hand. Of course
it is referenced!

Then the "research design" and the "research", itself.

(NancyGoon doesn't know what an ANOVA is from her pucker.)

Results of the research and the conclusion.

Bibliography. (All literature that has been referenced and utilized).

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
>
> Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
>
> Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
>
> Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
>
> We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.

BURNED!!!

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 6:30:58 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
> On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 14:50:42 -0800 (PST), Zod <vhug...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 5:47:45 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
> >> On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 13:47:45 -0800 (PST), NancyGene
> >> <nancygene...@gmail.com> wrote:
> >>
> >> >Class, we know that you recall our
> >
> >
> >xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> >
> >
> >> You are one silly ass.
> >>
> >> All those quotes were referenced. See the reference and check the
> >> bibliography.
> >>
> >> You really don't know much, do you?
> >>
> >> You are a dishonest and deceitful worm.
> >
> >Nancy G. is one of those "know it all"s who... don't.
> >
> >Ha ha.
> She has absolutely no idea of the format of a dissertation.
>
> The doctoral dissertation presents "NEW" and "ORIGINAL" research into
> a given topic.
>
> In order to do that,a "Rationale" is needed along with a "Review of
> the Literature" (previous research) into the topic at hand. Of course
> it is referenced!
>
> Then the "research design" and the "research", itself.
>
> (NancyGoon doesn't know what an ANOVA is from her pucker.)
>
> Results of the research and the conclusion.
>
> Bibliography. (All literature that has been referenced and utilized).

And... MELTDOWN!!!

Game: NancyGene.

Well played.

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html

>
> Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
>
> Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
>
> Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “

How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?

> We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.

We think you're a clown.

On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 16:49:50 -0800 (PST), George Dance
<georgedance04@yahoo.ca> wrote:

>On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
>> Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
>> https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
>
>>
>> Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
>>
>> Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
>>
>> Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
>> “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
>
>How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
>
>> We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
>
>We think you're a clown.

Hard to believe that anybody would display that amount of ignorance
for the world to see. Maybe she doesn't realize that what she writes
is permanent and can be read by anybody.

I think she is just a horrid little girl who says anything that jumps
into her warped mind. I have never experienced anybody who displays
such abject stupidity.

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
>
> >
> > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> >
> > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> >
> > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> We think you're a clown.

To say the least.

🙂

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
>
> >
> > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> >
> > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> >
> > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> We think you're a clown.

His "original" statement summarizing Tocqueville was copied almost directly from its source. A direct quote would have been preferable.

As NancyGene correctly pointed out, Jake's dissertation paper appears to have been little more than a modified version of its source.

He's like the kid who copies his homework essay from the text book, making sure to change a few words here and there to make it "original."

No self-respecting teacher would accept something like that... yet Jake claims to have been a teacher.

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 8:08:29 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
> On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 16:49:50 -0800 (PST), George Dance
> <george...@yahoo.ca> wrote:
>
> >On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> >> Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> >> https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> >
> >>
> >> Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> >>
> >> Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> >>
> >> Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> >> “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> >
> >How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> >
> >> We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> >
> >We think you're a clown.
> Hard to believe that anybody would display that amount of ignorance
> for the world to see. Maybe she doesn't realize that what she writes
> is permanent and can be read by anybody.
>
> I think she is just a horrid little girl who says anything that jumps
> into her warped mind. I have never experienced anybody who displays
> such abject stupidity.

The only reason NancyGene came here was to maliciously stalk and harass Stephan Pickering, not for me poetry.

HTH and HAND.

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 8:08:29 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
> On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 16:49:50 -0800 (PST), George Dance
> <george...@yahoo.ca> wrote:
>
> >On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> >> Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> >> https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> >
> >>
> >> Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> >>
> >> Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> >>
> >> Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> >> “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> >
> >How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> >
> >> We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> >
> >We think you're a clown.
> Hard to believe that anybody would display that amount of ignorance
> for the world to see. Maybe she doesn't realize that what she writes
> is permanent and can be read by anybody.
>
> I think she is just a horrid little girl who says anything that jumps
> into her warped mind. I have never experienced anybody who displays
> such abject stupidity.

There is no such thing as “abject stupidity”.

On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 9:50:21 PM UTC-5, cocodeso...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism.. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> >
> > >
> > > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> > >
> > > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> > >
> > > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> > How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> > > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> > We think you're a clown.

> His "original" statement summarizing Tocqueville was copied almost directly from its source. A direct quote would have been preferable.

He was summarizing Tocqueville's views. Whether a direct quote would have been preferable is fair comment,;but we're not discussing the aesthetics of the paper but its ethics, so it is irrelevant.
> As NancyGene correctly pointed out, Jake's dissertation paper appears to have been little more than a modified version of its source.

NastyGene did not link the paper, and the only version I've found is mostly beyond a paywall; but it's clear from the title alone -- "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs" -- that it was not a paper on Tocqueville's political philosophy, or on political philosophy at all. The one sentence NG did quote looks like part of a quick summary of historical views that often form part of a paper's introductory remarks. For NastyGene to call the paper a "modified version" of a Tocqueville essay, and for you to agree with that, shows only that neither of you even bothered to read it.

> He's like the kid who copies his homework essay from the text book, making sure to change a few words here and there to make it "original."
>
> No self-respecting teacher would accept something like that... yet Jake claims to have been a teacher.

Either you've forgotten that this is a dissertation, that passed review by professors in the field (who are obviously more competent judges of it than either your or your troll ally), or you're trying an Emperor's New Clothes argument simply to slander them as well.

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 12:34:04 AM UTC, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> >
> > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> >
> > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> >
> > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> >
> > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> BURNED!!!

Yes, David R. Procter is a proven plagiarist. There are more examples.

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 12:35:45 AM UTC, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 6:30:58 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
> > On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 14:50:42 -0800 (PST), Zod <vhug...@gmail.com>
> > wrote:
> > >On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 5:47:45 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
> > >> On Tue, 27 Dec 2022 13:47:45 -0800 (PST), NancyGene
> > >> <nancygene...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > >>
> > >> >Class, we know that you recall our
> > >
> > >
> > >xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > >
> > >
> > >> You are one silly ass.
> > >>
> > >> All those quotes were referenced. See the reference and check the
> > >> bibliography.
> > >>
> > >> You really don't know much, do you?
> > >>
> > >> You are a dishonest and deceitful worm.
> > >
> > >Nancy G. is one of those "know it all"s who... don't.
> > >
> > >Ha ha.
> > She has absolutely no idea of the format of a dissertation.
> >
> > The doctoral dissertation presents "NEW" and "ORIGINAL" research into
> > a given topic.
> >
> > In order to do that,a "Rationale" is needed along with a "Review of
> > the Literature" (previous research) into the topic at hand. Of course
> > it is referenced!
> >
> > Then the "research design" and the "research", itself.
> >
> > (NancyGoon doesn't know what an ANOVA is from her pucker.)
> >
> > Results of the research and the conclusion.
> >
> > Bibliography. (All literature that has been referenced and utilized).
> And... MELTDOWN!!!
>
> Game: NancyGene.
>
> Well played.
Thank you. We didn't have to go very far into his paper to see that he was taking the lazy, illegal way of writing it. The example we just posted was on page 5!

Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:

> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
>> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
>> > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
>> > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
>>
>> >
>> > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
>> >
>> > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
>> >
>> > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
>> > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
>> How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
>> > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
>> We think you're a clown.

> His "original" statement summarizing Tocqueville was copied almost directly from its sour
With link to the original included.

Mack didn't try to pass the writing off as his own, so it isn't plagiarism.

HTH and HAND.

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 7:21:05 AM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 12:34:04 AM UTC, michaelmalef...@gmail..com wrote:
> > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism.. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> > >
> > > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> > >
> > > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> > >
> > > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> > >
> > > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> > BURNED!!!
> Yes, David R. Procter is a proven plagiarist. There are more examples.

Who’s afraid of a “proven plagiarist”? David R. Procter is an emotionally
unstable, but highly trained government assassin. Be afraid, be very afraid..

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 2:50:21 AM UTC, cocodeso...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism.. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> >
> > >
> > > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> > >
> > > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> > >
> > > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> > How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> > > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> > We think you're a clown.
> His "original" statement summarizing Tocqueville was copied almost directly from its source. A direct quote would have been preferable.

That is the first thing a student learns when writing a term paper in high school--don't plagiarize, write the concept in "your own words," and give your sources. We were astounded that a person who was seeking a higher degree would stoop to just substituting a word here and there and presenting the sentences as his own. However, the paper was "written" in 1992, before the Internet was available to check sources. We think that David R. Procter thought he would never get caught. Enter NancyGene.
>
> As NancyGene correctly pointed out, Jake's dissertation paper appears to have been little more than a modified version of its source.
Copied and pasted.
>
> He's like the kid who copies his homework essay from the text book, making sure to change a few words here and there to make it "original."
Or the one who does his book report from the description of the book on the dust jacket flap.
>
> No self-respecting teacher would accept something like that... yet Jake claims to have been a teacher.
His college is not well respected, and we doubt that anyone looked at his "dissertation." It also has incorrect punctuation, which someone should have caught (if anyone had actually read it). An Ed.D. is not worth a "pitcher of warm spit," and the only reason to get one would be if the person wanted to be a principal or administrator at a school. The "dissertation" is essentially a glorified term paper, with no original thought. The Ed.D. degree is easy to get (a joke) and doesn't require any particular brain power. We see that the people who are admitted to the graduate program at WVU only have to have a 2.75 GPA! Wow.

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 7:44:24 AM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 2:50:21 AM UTC, cocodeso...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > > > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> > >
> > > >
> > > > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> > > >
> > > > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> > > >
> > > > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > > > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> > > How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> > > > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> > > We think you're a clown.
> > His "original" statement summarizing Tocqueville was copied almost directly from its source. A direct quote would have been preferable.
> That is the first thing a student learns when writing a term paper in high school--don't plagiarize, write the concept in "your own words," and give your sources. We were astounded that a person who was seeking a higher degree would stoop to just substituting a word here and there and presenting the sentences as his own. However, the paper was "written" in 1992, before the Internet was available to check sources. We think that David R. Procter thought he would never get caught. Enter NancyGene.
> >
> > As NancyGene correctly pointed out, Jake's dissertation paper appears to have been little more than a modified version of its source.
> Copied and pasted.
> >
> > He's like the kid who copies his homework essay from the text book, making sure to change a few words here and there to make it "original."
> Or the one who does his book report from the description of the book on the dust jacket flap.
> >
> > No self-respecting teacher would accept something like that... yet Jake claims to have been a teacher.
> His college is not well respected, and we doubt that anyone looked at his "dissertation." It also has incorrect punctuation, which someone should have caught (if anyone had actually read it). An Ed.D. is not worth a "pitcher of warm spit," and the only reason to get one would be if the person wanted to be a principal or administrator at a school. The "dissertation" is essentially a glorified term paper, with no original thought. The Ed.D. degree is easy to get (a joke) and doesn't require any particular brain power. We see that the people who are admitted to the graduate program at WVU only have to have a 2.75 GPA! Wow.

You haven’t read many dissertations, or you wouldn’t be “astounded” at all.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Martin_Luther_King_Jr._authorship_issues

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 7:20:31 AM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 9:50:21 PM UTC-5, cocodeso...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > > > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> > >
> > > >
> > > > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> > > >
> > > > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> > > >
> > > > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > > > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> > > How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> > > > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> > > We think you're a clown.
>
> > His "original" statement summarizing Tocqueville was copied almost directly from its source. A direct quote would have been preferable.
> He was summarizing Tocqueville's views. Whether a direct quote would have been preferable is fair comment,;but we're not discussing the aesthetics of the paper but its ethics, so it is irrelevant.

I'm discussing the ethics of his paper, George.

There is a not-so-fine line between summarizing the content of one's source and copying it nearly word for word.

At best, it demonstrates a lazy, half-assed effort on the student's part.

At worst, it constitutes an act for plagiarism as defined by Merriam-Webster: "to steal and pass off (the ideas or words of another) as one's own."

Yes, Jake credits his source, but unless one actually goes to the library and/or hunts down a copy of his source, one would not know that the majority of the words, phrases and sentence structures had been plucked, bodily, from this source.

> > As NancyGene correctly pointed out, Jake's dissertation paper appears to have been little more than a modified version of its source.
> NastyGene did not link the paper, and the only version I've found is mostly beyond a paywall; but it's clear from the title alone -- "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs" -- that it was not a paper on Tocqueville's political philosophy, or on political philosophy at all. The one sentence NG did quote looks like part of a quick summary of historical views that often form part of a paper's introductory remarks. For NastyGene to call the paper a "modified version" of a Tocqueville essay, and for you to agree with that, shows only that neither of you even bothered to read it.
>

What you doubt and what in fact transpired are matters of speculation at this point.

It is possible that NancyGene cherry-picked a passage that Jake plagiarized in an attempt to discredit his entire dissertation. However, even assuming that such were the case, the fact that one portion of a paper can be discredited as "plagiarism" cast doubt on the remaining portions. Unless Jake credited his sources for every line in his dissertation, and unless all of said sources are readily available, it would be difficult, if not impossible, to establish that any portion of said dissertation was original.

> > He's like the kid who copies his homework essay from the text book, making sure to change a few words here and there to make it "original."
> >
> > No self-respecting teacher would accept something like that... yet Jake claims to have been a teacher.
> Either you've forgotten that this is a dissertation, that passed review by professors in the field (who are obviously more competent judges of it than either your or your troll ally), or you're trying an Emperor's New Clothes argument simply to slander them as well.
>

How do we know that it passed review by a professors in the field? NancyGene has said that the college in question was "one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill." In order for the supposed "review" to hold any weight, one would have to know the name of the college, the college's reputation, and the details regarding how such dissertation papers are reviewed there.

I'm not attempting slander Jake or his college -- I'm simply addressing the few facts as we were given them. And, barring any additional evidence to the contrary, the court must find in favor of the prosecution.

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 7:35:56 AM UTC-5, Spam-I-Am wrote:
> On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 7:21:05 AM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 12:34:04 AM UTC, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > > > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> > > >
> > > > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> > > >
> > > > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> > > >
> > > > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > > > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> > > >
> > > > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> > > BURNED!!!
> > Yes, David R. Procter is a proven plagiarist. There are more examples.
> Who’s afraid of a “proven plagiarist”? David R. Procter is an emotionally
> unstable, but highly trained government assassin. Be afraid, be very afraid.

To date, I have seen 4 photos of D.R. Procter -- 2 dating from several years ago, where he appears relatively robust for a man of his advanced years.... and two more recent ones where he appears to be a shell of his former self. At this point, I doubt that he could lift a seven pound military rifle, much less actually use one.

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 7:44:24 AM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 2:50:21 AM UTC, cocodeso...@gmail.com wrote:
> > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > > > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> > >
> > > >
> > > > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> > > >
> > > > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> > > >
> > > > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > > > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> > > How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> > > > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> > > We think you're a clown.
> > His "original" statement summarizing Tocqueville was copied almost directly from its source. A direct quote would have been preferable.
> That is the first thing a student learns when writing a term paper in high school--don't plagiarize, write the concept in "your own words," and give your sources. We were astounded that a person who was seeking a higher degree would stoop to just substituting a word here and there and presenting the sentences as his own. However, the paper was "written" in 1992, before the Internet was available to check sources. We think that David R. Procter thought he would never get caught. Enter NancyGene.
> >
> > As NancyGene correctly pointed out, Jake's dissertation paper appears to have been little more than a modified version of its source.
> Copied and pasted.
> >
> > He's like the kid who copies his homework essay from the text book, making sure to change a few words here and there to make it "original."
> Or the one who does his book report from the description of the book on the dust jacket flap.
> >
> > No self-respecting teacher would accept something like that... yet Jake claims to have been a teacher.
> His college is not well respected, and we doubt that anyone looked at his "dissertation." It also has incorrect punctuation, which someone should have caught (if anyone had actually read it). An Ed.D. is not worth a "pitcher of warm spit," and the only reason to get one would be if the person wanted to be a principal or administrator at a school. The "dissertation" is essentially a glorified term paper, with no original thought. The Ed.D. degree is easy to get (a joke) and doesn't require any particular brain power. We see that the people who are admitted to the graduate program at WVU only have to have a 2.75 GPA! Wow.
>

TWICE BURNED!!!

On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 7:54:04 AM UTC-5, Spam-I-Am wrote:
> On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 7:44:24 AM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > On Wednesday, December 28, 2022 at 2:50:21 AM UTC, cocodeso...@gmail.com wrote:
> > > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 7:49:51 PM UTC-5, george...@yahoo.ca wrote:
> > > > On Tuesday, December 27, 2022 at 4:47:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > > > > Class, we know that you recall our previous discussions on plagiarism. “Don’t plagiarize. Express your own thoughts in your own words…. Note, too, that simply changing a few words here and there, or changing the order of a few words in a sentence or paragraph, is still plagiarism. Plagiarism is one of the most serious crimes in academia.” (Pechenik, 2001; p.10).
> > > > > https://ori.hhs.gov/education/products/roig_st_johns/paraphrasing%20and%20plagiarism.html
> > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Therefore, consider Exhibit A from a dissertation submitted to a college that is one trailer-step-up from a diploma mill. All caps on words are our emphasis on the extremely disturbing similarities between the dissertation and the source material. > < denotes substituted words.
> > > > >
> > > > > Procter, David Richard, "School-based community service: A descriptive analysis of four high school programs." (1992), p. 5. “In his memoirs, Tocqueville (1956) […] Furthermore, the Frenchman identified the seeds of “alienation” in the form of “INDIVIDUALISM” which, he said, IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING WHICH >inclines< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >ties< with the community AND DRAW APART WITH FAMILY AND FRIENDS, THUS FORMING A >small<, intimate CIRCLE AND LEAVIing the rest of SOCIETY TO ITSELF.
> > > > >
> > > > > Alexis de Tocqueville, “Democracy in America” - “Of Individualism in Democratic Countries,” Chapter II. https://xroads.virginia.edu/~Hyper/DETOC/ch2_02.htm:
> > > > > “INDIVIDUALISM IS A MATURE AND CALM FEELING, which >disposes< EACH MEMBER OF THE COMMUNITY TO SEVER >himself< from the mass of his fellows and to DRAW APART WITH >his< FAMILY AND >his< FRIENDS, so that after he has THUS FORMed A >little< CIRCLE of his own, he willingly LEAVES SOCIETY at large TO ITSELF. “
> > > > How is that plagiarism when he cited the source -- "Tocqueville (1956)."?
> > > > > We think that the school should retroactively reject the dissertation and withdraw the degree. There are other instances of plagiarism, and we see a pattern that has continued to this day.
> > > > We think you're a clown.
> > > His "original" statement summarizing Tocqueville was copied almost directly from its source. A direct quote would have been preferable.
> > That is the first thing a student learns when writing a term paper in high school--don't plagiarize, write the concept in "your own words," and give your sources. We were astounded that a person who was seeking a higher degree would stoop to just substituting a word here and there and presenting the sentences as his own. However, the paper was "written" in 1992, before the Internet was available to check sources. We think that David R. Procter thought he would never get caught. Enter NancyGene.
> > >
> > > As NancyGene correctly pointed out, Jake's dissertation paper appears to have been little more than a modified version of its source.
> > Copied and pasted.
> > >
> > > He's like the kid who copies his homework essay from the text book, making sure to change a few words here and there to make it "original."
> > Or the one who does his book report from the description of the book on the dust jacket flap.
> > >
> > > No self-respecting teacher would accept something like that... yet Jake claims to have been a teacher.
> > His college is not well respected, and we doubt that anyone looked at his "dissertation." It also has incorrect punctuation, which someone should have caught (if anyone had actually read it). An Ed.D. is not worth a "pitcher of warm spit," and the only reason to get one would be if the person wanted to be a principal or administrator at a school. The "dissertation" is essentially a glorified term paper, with no original thought. The Ed.D. degree is easy to get (a joke) and doesn't require any particular brain power. We see that the people who are admitted to the graduate program at WVU only have to have a 2.75 GPA! Wow.
> You haven’t read many dissertations, or you wouldn’t be “astounded” at all.
> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Martin_Luther_King_Jr._authorship_issues

I haven't read any dissertations... but one needn't have read any in order to determine whether plagiarism has taken place. The similarities between the text of the source material and the "original" summarization serve as proof.