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Re: The Ladder of St. Augustine

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Subject: Re: The Ladder of St. Augustine
From: ashwurth...@gmail.com (Ash Wurthing)
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 by: Ash Wurthing - Thu, 10 Nov 2022 21:38 UTC

On Thursday, November 10, 2022 at 1:14:52 PM UTC-5, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> On Thursday, November 10, 2022 at 1:09:19 PM UTC-5, Mack A. Damia wrote:
> > "The Ladder of St. Augustine"
> > - Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
> >
> > "The heights by great men reached and kept
> > Were not attained by sudden flight,
> > But they, while their companions slept,
> > Were toiling upward in the night."
> Hi Mack.
>
> Please see 8) in our Guidelines, below:
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Greetings Sir,
Do not take offense by Pendragon's challenge, he challenged me also the first time I posted a classic poem without any commentary. This is alt.arts.poetry.commentary, not alt.arts.poetry, after all. I'm sure that you understand the focused topic hierarchy of Usenet. And my apologies for not remembering what branch you served in, but if you were Army, you would be able to answer the challenge with dignity.

"I have seen the weak forsake humanity.
I have heard the traitors praise our enemy.*
I've seen challenged men become even bolder,
I've seen the Duty, Honor, Sacrifice of the Soldier."
--'Old Soldier's Prayer' https://www.ausa.org/old-soldiers-prayer

* how sadly true that was, when Americans supported Putin rather than Ukraine
how they looked the other way when Trump blew off NATO so to go off and be buddy with buddy with Putin

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By: Mack A. Damia on Thu, 10 Nov 2022

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